Eye of the Beholder

You always feel like
A Sunflower amidst the Daffodils
A Thistle among the Tulips
Out of place, unsightly

You see yourself
As the ugly duckling
But who never transformed
Into the beautiful swan

You feel ugly and at odds
Ungainly and ungraceful
How wrong you are
To me you are perfection

You should feel like
You are a Rose amidst Cabbages
An Orchid among Daises
In pride of place, radiant

I see you as
The beautiful signet
Who was transformed
Into a beautiful graceful swan

That’s how I see you
An angel from the host
A goddess among mortals
Whom I shall forever worship
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Curtis Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 3:12 AM
Thank you both
Gorelick Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 5:39 PM
Oh that lucky woman.. I hope you let her read this..shell be forever yours...BG
Mehta Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 2:03 PM
You are right, everything depends on how you look at the things, Paul
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