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Written January 8 2026 for Write A Beautiful Verse contest sponsored by Constance LaFrance

 

Eye of the beholder

Grandmother was a beauty in her way
Dark brown skin like a Hershey bar
Salt n pepper black hair wisped by wind
As she snaps green peas in a bowl
The sunflowers she planted so romantic 
Casting seeds like red roses in the breeze
Feeding the birds in belly and our eyes
Like bowling balls knocking down such sights
Her bare feet ashy knock knees calloused 
From praying the most selfless prayers
She dips snuff and spits in an old Pepsi can
Unashamed of her poverty and southern accent
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Wolf Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 8:19 PM
A beautiful portrait, Karen. And I can see your grandma clearly just from the lines you've written. That's an accomplishment!! Hurrah! ~ Gershon
Jones Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 11:26 PM
Thank you! She was truly a meek and humble soul! Hugs
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