Eye of Afternoon

While the day is bright
I am content unto myself
And only with oncoming night
Do I begin to speak or solitary, write,
Reluctant to allow 
My thoughts to die asleep.

The sun is flying overhead, but see...
A shadow reaches for the mind
And I would leave awake one eye
To know the paths I've been, 
To see me where I lie.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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May Avatar
September 11, 2022 at 12:13 AM
The night awakens the muse in the glow of moonlight, Very nicely penned
Mccann Avatar
September 11, 2022 at 4:19 AM
And very nicely commented! Thank you, Joseph! Elizabeth
Peck Avatar
September 7, 2022 at 8:05 AM
~ A shadow reaches for the mind... a beautiful poem.
Mccann Avatar
September 11, 2022 at 4:20 AM
Thanks, Ann. I'm stuck at the moment so your comment is especially welcome now! Elizabeth
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September 1, 2022 at 5:04 AM
Powerfully worded poem Elizabeth and like Gershon I read it a few times….clever! Debx
Mccann Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 3:32 PM
Thanks, Deb! So good to hear from you. How's it out there in the wild West? Elizabeth
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August 31, 2022 at 3:13 AM
Gershon, your comments are my oxygen. "Thank you" is nowhere near enough. Eliz.
Wolf Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 9:37 PM
Profound Penning, methinks. I have read this three times. It's still not enough. Kudos, gw
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