Eye Hear What You're Saying

My Optometrist told me to blink 

This may not be as bad as you think 

With his light turned on high 

He let out a big sigh 

Said it looks like your eye's in the pink
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 10:56 AM
Hello Randy Freie, oh that does not sound good. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 10:00 AM
Hello Randy Freie, oh, that sounds painful. I hope you are feeling better now. Happy weekend m y friend. /Darlene/
Freie Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 12:53 AM
Hi Darlene, I didn't have to deal with pink eye, but I did have cryosurgery to repair torn retinas. I would rather have had pink eye. Thanks for the feedback.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 4:24 PM
Could have been worse, your eye could have been on the blink… Beryl
Freie Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 11:33 PM
Then I wouldn't be able to wink and my dreams of romance would sink.
Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2024 at 11:15 AM
Whoa!! I hope it heals without a problem. Sara K
Freie Avatar
August 4, 2024 at 11:47 AM
So do eye
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