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Eye Dropper

Eye dropper slow I understand we have to go low We have to wait for another glow Of this once-in-awhile love About this once-in-awhile love Can we have a barter trade? So once-in-awhile can be everyday Or shouldn't I say? Only thing I can do is pray

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/27/2015 2:36:00 PM
Blessings to you, njeri! xx
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Date: 2/27/2015 1:31:00 PM
A nice free-flow. Well done, njeri.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/27/2015 1:35:00 PM
Thank you Julia. Blessings to you
Date: 2/16/2015 5:01:00 PM
an interesting vehicle (the eye dropper) to describe a impoverished love. I enjoyed it. very concise.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 3:41:00 PM
Thank you so much Michael.
Date: 2/16/2015 9:02:00 AM
A drop of love is sometimes enough to sustain us. Still I believe you deserve more than mere sustenance! I hope your prayer is answered and love pours down in warm torrential rains until you are blissfully soaked and satiated!
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Date: 2/18/2015 3:39:00 PM
I love that Richard. So sweet of you. Thank you my friend
Date: 2/15/2015 8:30:00 PM
Such truths should be expounded... I have enjoyed this write Njeri... Verlena
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 3:37:00 PM
Thanks Verlena
Date: 2/15/2015 6:09:00 PM
an interesting love poem, using symbol of the eye dropper!!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/15/2015 6:48:00 PM
Yep, thanks Andrea.
Date: 2/15/2015 3:21:00 PM
Nice poem
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/15/2015 3:27:00 PM
Thanks Gwen

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