Njeri Hunjeri Poet I do not know?

Eye Dropper

Eye dropper slow
I understand we have to go low
We have to wait for another glow
Of this once-in-awhile love

About this once-in-awhile love
Can we have a barter trade?
So once-in-awhile can be everyday
Or shouldn't I say?
Only thing I can do is pray

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Julia Ward February 27, 2015 at 2:36 PM Blessings to you, njeri! xx

Julia Ward February 27, 2015 at 1:31 PM A nice free-flow. Well done, njeri. Njeri Hunjeri February 27, 2015 at 1:35 PM Thank you Julia. Blessings to you

Michael Miers February 16, 2015 at 5:01 PM an interesting vehicle (the eye dropper) to describe a impoverished love. I enjoyed it. very concise. Njeri Hunjeri February 18, 2015 at 3:41 PM Thank you so much Michael.

Richard Lamoureux February 16, 2015 at 9:02 AM A drop of love is sometimes enough to sustain us. Still I believe you deserve more than mere sustenance! I hope your prayer is answered and love pours down in warm torrential rains until you are blissfully soaked and satiated! Njeri Hunjeri February 18, 2015 at 3:39 PM I love that Richard. So sweet of you. Thank you my friend

Verlena S. Walker February 15, 2015 at 8:30 PM Such truths should be expounded... I have enjoyed this write Njeri... Verlena Njeri Hunjeri February 18, 2015 at 3:37 PM Thanks Verlena

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2015 at 6:09 PM an interesting love poem, using symbol of the eye dropper!! Njeri Hunjeri February 15, 2015 at 6:48 PM Yep, thanks Andrea.

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs February 15, 2015 at 3:21 PM Nice poem Njeri Hunjeri February 15, 2015 at 3:27 PM Thanks Gwen