Eye Dew

The bride had grand dreams of wedded bliss
Sealed at the alter with a pure kiss
Alas the groom
Forecast her doom,
"I shall get to the bottom of this!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Laurie Avatar
July 24, 2019 at 10:56 PM
Nice play on a quote Rico. Well done - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 5:34 PM
I guess that proves there is Still Life in old quotes? Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 8:10 PM
Ha!
Leffanta Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 5:33 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 3:33 AM
love the poem but the clever title is just a gem Rico!:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 5:24 PM
Mahalo, Jan! Aloha! Rico
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