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Eye Contact Some said he had those scary eyes, unnerving, somehow seeming to look clear through, capable of seeing the truth – of you. They didn’t stare at you, just sort of found you and held you in an eerie embrace. There was a glint to the eyes, a sharpness to the edges, a weary, and wary, wiliness. And yet, they drew you in, these cold and smoldering, blue-gray questioners of all they see. Tight lines rimmed the edges of the pools, white tipped lashes fanning and refocusing the laser looks. And then they smiled, as if something had just reminded them of a pleasing sight, a soft sunrise rose across his face, a gentle fox to kit wink, an unguarded moment on the parapet of life. John G. Lawless 9/16/2014 For PD"S A poem you have not entered in a contest #12 poetry contest

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Date: 1/1/2015 10:52:00 AM
Wish you happy new year and congrats on the high win, John
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John Lawless
Date: 1/4/2015 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Dr Mehta for checking in with a comment
Date: 1/1/2015 9:01:00 AM
absolutely adore the imagery here found it quite a chilling write - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan x
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John Lawless
Date: 1/4/2015 8:37:00 AM
Thank you Jan as always I appreciate your input.
Date: 1/1/2015 8:18:00 AM
- A contest that I had forgotten - Congratulations your wonderful winning poem,John - Happy New Year !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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John Lawless
Date: 1/4/2015 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise
Date: 1/1/2015 7:28:00 AM
I find this a very fascinating poem John. I agree with Maurice, it's brilliant. 7+fav.
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John Lawless
Date: 1/4/2015 8:35:00 AM
OH, Brenda, thank you...a "fav" and a "7", the ultimate Poetry Soup thumbs up, much appreciated as is your continued support of and input on my writing.
Date: 12/31/2014 9:43:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your well deserved win. Happy New Year John.
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John Lawless
Date: 1/4/2015 8:33:00 AM
Thanks again Maurice for your continued support
Date: 12/31/2014 9:09:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win and happy new year John...huggs
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Date: 1/4/2015 9:55:00 AM
Call me Kay, kayod , Kayode,this is my name John and I love answering it...huggs
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John Lawless
Date: 1/4/2015 8:33:00 AM
Thank you ... OK, I have to ask, May I call you Kay?? Or is Kayode a pseudonym for use on Poetrysoup.
Date: 12/31/2014 8:55:00 PM
John, thank you for supporting my contest. I'm taking this time to enjoy and invite you on over to my latest contest "Busted." Drop by if you'd like or have the time. Take Care, and enjoy the 2015... Happy new Year... Love Linda
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John Lawless
Date: 1/4/2015 8:30:00 AM
As always PD, my pleasure
Date: 9/17/2014 3:50:00 PM
the EYES HAVE it! I love eyes and I love the way zoomed in a pair of them!!wonderful picture.
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John Lawless
Date: 9/17/2014 6:18:00 PM
Andrea, this is another poem spurred by a contest. However I did not write it in contextual conformity.
Date: 9/17/2014 2:34:00 PM
WOW! File this one under brilliant.
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John Lawless
Date: 9/17/2014 6:19:00 PM
thanks Maurice, I've know a few people who's eyes could stop you in your tracks.

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