Eye Contact

Eye Contact


Some said he had those scary eyes,
unnerving, somehow seeming to look
clear through, capable of seeing the
truth – of you.  They didn’t stare at
you, just sort of found you and held
you in an eerie embrace.  There was
a glint to the eyes, a sharpness to
the edges, a weary, and wary, wiliness.
And yet, they drew you in, these cold
and smoldering, blue-gray questioners
of all they see.  Tight lines rimmed the
edges of the pools, white tipped lashes
fanning and refocusing the laser looks.
And then they smiled, as if something
had just reminded them of a pleasing
sight, a soft sunrise rose across his face,
a gentle fox to kit wink, an unguarded
moment on the parapet of life.


John G. Lawless
9/16/2014
For PD"S A poem you have not entered in a contest #12 poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 10:52 AM
Wish you happy new year and congrats on the high win, John
Lawless Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 8:38 AM
Thanks Dr Mehta for checking in with a comment
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 9:01 AM
absolutely adore the imagery here found it quite a chilling write - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan x
Lawless Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 8:37 AM
Thank you Jan as always I appreciate your input.
Andresen Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 8:18 AM
- A contest that I had forgotten - Congratulations your wonderful winning poem,John - Happy New Year !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Lawless Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 8:36 AM
Thanks Anne Lise
Meier-Hans Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 7:28 AM
I find this a very fascinating poem John. I agree with Maurice, it's brilliant. 7+fav.
Lawless Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 8:35 AM
OH, Brenda, thank you...a "fav" and a "7", the ultimate Poetry Soup thumbs up, much appreciated as is your continued support of and input on my writing.
Yvonne Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 9:43 PM
Back to congratulate you on your well deserved win. Happy New Year John.
Lawless Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 8:33 AM
Thanks again Maurice for your continued support
Kayode Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 9:09 PM
Congrats on your fine win and happy new year John...huggs
Kayode Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 9:55 AM
Call me Kay, kayod , Kayode,this is my name John and I love answering it...huggs
Lawless Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 8:33 AM
Thank you ... OK, I have to ask, May I call you Kay?? Or is Kayode a pseudonym for use on Poetrysoup.
A   Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 8:55 PM
John, thank you for supporting my contest. I'm taking this time to enjoy and invite you on over to my latest contest "Busted." Drop by if you'd like or have the time. Take Care, and enjoy the 2015... Happy new Year... Love Linda
Lawless Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 8:30 AM
As always PD, my pleasure
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 3:50 PM
the EYES HAVE it! I love eyes and I love the way zoomed in a pair of them!!wonderful picture.
Lawless Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 6:18 PM
Andrea, this is another poem spurred by a contest. However I did not write it in contextual conformity.
Yvonne Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 2:34 PM
WOW! File this one under brilliant.
Lawless Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 6:19 PM
thanks Maurice, I've know a few people who's eyes could stop you in your tracks.
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