Jared Pickett Poet Acrostic

Eye Candy

Double Acrostic

I just want to mention before you read this poem that "Oasis" by Charmaine Chircop
allowed me the inspiration to write this. Thoughts had been swirling through my mind 
for about 24 hours and I was having difficulty finding the form to express them. Those
of you that know me know that I favor difficult forms rather than plain Freestyle. 
Thank you Charma, It is good to be back!!


Eye Candy



Erratic, heart thrusting through my chest!
Yoga is in session, followers in succession! 
Edible delights without excess embellishment.

Core poses carve, define rippled mid-sections
Anxiety has subsided, muscles relaxed. Objective,
Nurture those curves! Endure tension, calm her nerves.
Durability, her gift is my defection. Connection, A fifteen
Year friendship and we are both free agents!


Jared Pickett
2/13/2014
Asavvy1

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Huberta Van Akkeren March 4, 2014 at 6:49 PM I really like the way you express yourself here Jared...such clarity, well done Huberta

Royal Ninja February 18, 2014 at 9:52 AM I like the inspiration, and how this poem became sweeter than sweet. I have my eye, on a Twizzler right now, and I'm not talking about the candy, candy. I'm talking about a luscious .----..... Well, you get the picture. ROYAL Jared Pickett February 18, 2014 at 10:26 AM Yes, I do!! Thank you Royal I am glad you liked it!!Asavvy1

Jan Allison February 17, 2014 at 11:47 AM so its not just me who mulls over for hours and starts writing - usually at 3am ! I wrote my first acrostic poem too today - it must be catching. mine is based on bridge over troubled water for the competition. lovely write i so enjoyed reading it. Happy reading and writing Jan xx

Michael Alexander February 17, 2014 at 9:34 AM Thank you for sharing this poem, I think I'm going to give acrostic a try as I have never written one before. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this as I read it over and over. I may add it to my favorites ;) it'll be my first favorite poem :) - Mike

Charmaine Chircop February 13, 2014 at 5:08 PM Yoga definitely removes tention.This poem had a calming effect on my senses.Eye candy~I love the words you picked for your double acrostic and am glad my humble verse inspired it.Going to my favourites B-). Jared Pickett February 13, 2014 at 9:33 PM Thank you Charma! Charmaine Chircop February 13, 2014 at 5:09 PM tension i meant..Oops sorry : )