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Exuberant Friendship

My ardent faith in you leading me to your divine pond where I will flap my tiny hands and swim with you to the other shore. streaks of pleasure rose as the swimming lesson grows - swan and little boy Date of Entry : 10-08-2020 Contest : Haibun - Pick Your Theme Poetry Contest Sponsor : Line Gauthier

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David Smith

Date: 12/11/2023 2:25:00 PM

Your versatility in bringing your touch to so many themes. Hope you get this in time for Christmas My friend. Be happy, David in NZ

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 8/14/2020 12:17:00 AM

Oh I really loved this. I have 3 sons and 4 grandsons and I have pictures in my mind of them so innocent and trusting. I hope teddy had a ride on the goose's back. Good luck in the contest Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/15/2020 9:49:00 PM

Thank you Shirley.. You are blessed with the love of so many children.. Have a great day..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/11/2020 7:59:00 PM

I think that Line will love this as much as I do -- which is an awful, awful lot, my friend. A gem, to sparkle in the winner's circle of the contest. FAVE!! Thanks, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/11/2020 9:45:00 PM

A FAVE from a fine friend made my day bright.. Thank you Gershon..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2020 1:44:00 PM

this is utterly precious Jenish!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/11/2020 9:44:00 PM

Thank you Andrea for your delightful words..

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/11/2020 10:16:00 AM

Nice one Jenish. Great write! The picture is so lovely! Best of luck in the contest.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/11/2020 9:44:00 PM

Thank you Krish for your kind support..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/11/2020 4:22:00 AM

Wondrous writing! Superb Haibun, my friend, Jenish! Blessings.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/11/2020 4:44:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your kind support..

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/10/2020 10:34:00 PM

This is charming, Jenish:) for friendship:)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/11/2020 4:42:00 AM

Thank you Jo...

Eve Roper

Date: 8/10/2020 1:07:00 PM

Awe, such a lovely verse; I can picture the both of them swimming. The expert and the novice.Good luck in Line's contest. Hugs Eve

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/10/2020 9:43:00 PM

Thank you Eve for your support..

V. Deepa

Date: 8/10/2020 12:26:00 PM

Dear Jenish sir, I always love the photo's you choose to display ,it syncs to your poem perfectly.:-) I will flap my tiny hands and swim ~lovely lines. I can envision the excitement that the little one shows to learn swimming.Enjoyed your muse.Keep inspiring:-)Take care.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/10/2020 9:41:00 PM

Thank you Deepa.. Your review is brighter than my poem.. Thank you for your continuing support..