Jenish Somadas Poet Haibun

Exuberant Friendship

My ardent faith in you leading me to your divine pond where I will flap my tiny hands and swim with you to the other shore.

streaks of pleasure rose
as the swimming lesson grows -
swan and little boy


Date of Entry : 10-08-2020
Contest : Haibun - Pick Your Theme Poetry Contest
Sponsor : Line Gauthier

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David Smith December 11, 2023 at 2:25 PM Your versatility in bringing your touch to so many themes. Hope you get this in time for Christmas My friend. Be happy, David in NZ

Shirley Hawkins August 14, 2020 at 12:17 AM Oh I really loved this. I have 3 sons and 4 grandsons and I have pictures in my mind of them so innocent and trusting. I hope teddy had a ride on the goose's back. Good luck in the contest Jenish. Jenish Somadas August 15, 2020 at 9:49 PM Thank you Shirley.. You are blessed with the love of so many children.. Have a great day..

Gershon Wolf August 11, 2020 at 7:59 PM I think that Line will love this as much as I do -- which is an awful, awful lot, my friend. A gem, to sparkle in the winner's circle of the contest. FAVE!! Thanks, Gershon Jenish Somadas August 11, 2020 at 9:45 PM A FAVE from a fine friend made my day bright.. Thank you Gershon..

Andrea Dietrich August 11, 2020 at 1:44 PM this is utterly precious Jenish! Jenish Somadas August 11, 2020 at 9:44 PM Thank you Andrea for your delightful words..

Krish Radhakrishna August 11, 2020 at 10:16 AM Nice one Jenish. Great write! The picture is so lovely! Best of luck in the contest. Jenish Somadas August 11, 2020 at 9:44 PM Thank you Krish for your kind support..

Demetrios Trifiatis August 11, 2020 at 4:22 AM Wondrous writing! Superb Haibun, my friend, Jenish! Blessings. Jenish Somadas August 11, 2020 at 4:44 AM Thank you Demetrios for your kind support..

Joanna Daniel August 10, 2020 at 10:34 PM This is charming, Jenish:) for friendship:) Jenish Somadas August 11, 2020 at 4:42 AM Thank you Jo...

Eve Roper August 10, 2020 at 1:07 PM Awe, such a lovely verse; I can picture the both of them swimming. The expert and the novice.Good luck in Line's contest. Hugs Eve Jenish Somadas August 10, 2020 at 9:43 PM Thank you Eve for your support..

V. Deepa August 10, 2020 at 12:26 PM Dear Jenish sir, I always love the photo's you choose to display ,it syncs to your poem perfectly.:-) I will flap my tiny hands and swim ~lovely lines. I can envision the excitement that the little one shows to learn swimming.Enjoyed your muse.Keep inspiring:-)Take care. Jenish Somadas August 10, 2020 at 9:41 PM Thank you Deepa.. Your review is brighter than my poem.. Thank you for your continuing support..