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'exuberance'

In my field of dreams
colourful flowers still dance
to the melody
the wind discharge – no sadness 
exuberance fill my soul


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Gerald Kithinji

August 5, 2013 at 1:48 PM

And still they dance!

Sean Goodwin

November 28, 2012 at 10:19 AM

Beautiful, really like this uplifting tanka. --Sean

Elizabeth Wesley

October 11, 2012 at 10:12 AM

Makes me want to get up and move with the wind, has a feeling of unstoppable joy in this special moment! Love, Elizabeth

Frederick Viedge

October 9, 2012 at 6:17 PM

Just nice...A little waft of innocence, thanks.

Audrey Haick

October 9, 2012 at 11:30 AM

This is joy-filled, Wilma!! I picture you smiling and I am glad, my dear friend! Enjoy the rest of the week Love, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

October 8, 2012 at 2:16 PM

that glorious field of dreams. Love it, wilma. and I am flattered you saw only my poem in your hurry!! Luv, andrea

Michael J. Falotico

October 7, 2012 at 10:23 AM

Beautiful tanka CTH sprinkled with lovely poetic words. Hope it's warming up there in Cape Town. Love from me to you. MJF xox

Nette Onclaud

October 7, 2012 at 8:31 AM

i am on cloud nine, wilms.. a lilting piece that uplifts my soul.. best wishes and huggs!..:)

Jack Ellison

October 6, 2012 at 3:42 PM

Love this beautiful upbeat poem my dear Wilma... love and hugs, Jack

Harry Horsman

October 5, 2012 at 5:26 AM

you are like a cloud Wilma, you come and delight one, then just drift away, leaving one waiting anxiously for your next rendering, and i wouldn't have it any other way... love what you write

Pace Ink-U-Script

October 4, 2012 at 10:26 AM

Excellent Tanka...I'm just like Ruben..I'm going to be more active..love your work as always..hugs

Kash Poet

October 4, 2012 at 8:35 AM

The captcha is saying 8888!!

Kash Poet

October 4, 2012 at 8:34 AM

Wow!A great tanka!You always excel with this form Wilmaa!

Russell Sivey

October 4, 2012 at 7:22 AM

This is an extremely wondrous write my friend! I am in awe with its exuberance that you have exuded within this fully delightful poem! I just love the intriguing way you have pieced together the lovely poem, a singly wonderful write! You have filled my mind with beauty and a way to supply my heart with bewilderment a superior poem! Awesome piece, Great Work!