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'exuberance'

In my field of dreams
colourful flowers still dance
to the melody
the wind discharge – no sadness 
exuberance fill my soul


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Gerald Kithinji

Date: 8/5/2013 1:48:00 PM

And still they dance!

Sean Goodwin

Date: 11/28/2012 10:19:00 AM

Beautiful, really like this uplifting tanka. --Sean

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/11/2012 10:12:00 AM

Makes me want to get up and move with the wind, has a feeling of unstoppable joy in this special moment! Love, Elizabeth

Frederick Viedge

Date: 10/9/2012 6:17:00 PM

Just nice...A little waft of innocence, thanks.

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/9/2012 11:30:00 AM

This is joy-filled, Wilma!! I picture you smiling and I am glad, my dear friend! Enjoy the rest of the week Love, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2012 2:16:00 PM

that glorious field of dreams. Love it, wilma. and I am flattered you saw only my poem in your hurry!! Luv, andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/7/2012 10:23:00 AM

Beautiful tanka CTH sprinkled with lovely poetic words. Hope it's warming up there in Cape Town. Love from me to you. MJF xox

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/7/2012 8:31:00 AM

i am on cloud nine, wilms.. a lilting piece that uplifts my soul.. best wishes and huggs!..:)

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/6/2012 3:42:00 PM

Love this beautiful upbeat poem my dear Wilma... love and hugs, Jack

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/5/2012 5:26:00 AM

you are like a cloud Wilma, you come and delight one, then just drift away, leaving one waiting anxiously for your next rendering, and i wouldn't have it any other way... love what you write

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 10/4/2012 10:26:00 AM

Excellent Tanka...I'm just like Ruben..I'm going to be more active..love your work as always..hugs

Kash Poet

Date: 10/4/2012 8:35:00 AM

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Kash Poet

Date: 10/4/2012 8:34:00 AM

Wow!A great tanka!You always excel with this form Wilmaa!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/4/2012 7:22:00 AM

This is an extremely wondrous write my friend! I am in awe with its exuberance that you have exuded within this fully delightful poem! I just love the intriguing way you have pieced together the lovely poem, a singly wonderful write! You have filled my mind with beauty and a way to supply my heart with bewilderment a superior poem! Awesome piece, Great Work!