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Willed Vague sword Weak heart and sight Boundless wisdom, although My soul has full enthusiasm Body growing old and becoming weak My resolve outweighs the bullet Reeled swilled Billed. (The Bell) Written: June 27, 2021 Ring My Bell Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Anderson

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/9/2021 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" I love your line, "My soul has full enthusiasm." It Does. What a picture you have here. What did she have to say??? Enjoy your win with blessings...........

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/9/2021 4:17:00 AM

Congratulations! A well deserved win! I cannot do this myself, but I admire those of you who can!

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/9/2021 4:34:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Caren, your sweet words are so uplifting, be blessed and have a wonderful day

Eve Roper

Date: 7/8/2021 5:03:00 PM

Great verse, Lasaad, congratulations on your win. Eve

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/8/2021 5:11:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve, for your comment and kind words. Blessings and kindest regards

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/8/2021 9:34:00 AM

Powerful words - poignant image, Lasaad. Many congratulations on your win! Blessings of renewal to you my friend - slow is not always a bad thing as we get to see the daisies in the sidewalk cracks.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/8/2021 11:10:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sam, for your gracious visit and delightful comment, I always wish you the best of everything every time and everywhere. My kindest regards and hugs

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/8/2021 1:48:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this (and the photo), making me smile... God bless you.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/8/2021 6:25:00 AM

Thank you so much, Beata; it's nice to wake up on such great news, and I'm happy to draw a gin on your face, blessings, and warm hugs

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/7/2021 9:05:00 PM

Beautifully Written. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/8/2021 6:26:00 AM

Thank you so much, you always bring me the good news, and I so much appreciated

Judy Ball

Date: 6/28/2021 3:47:00 PM

I now the feeling well my friend. At my age I have to take things a little slower. Take note from the turtle and the hare. Good job here and love the pic. God Bless, JB

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/28/2021 1:53:00 AM

Take things slowly, my friend. A lovely poem.

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/27/2021 3:23:00 PM

The cracks may be showing Lasaad, but the underlying integrity, is in fine fettle, and still peels out, I think this one sums you up, as the upbeat guy you are, great wording, must be a major contender for the contest, cheers David

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/27/2021 4:05:00 PM

So true, David, but as you said, the fundamental integrity is still in good shape. I'm so glad you like it because it's my first time trying this form—best wishes for the coming week.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/27/2021 3:20:00 PM

I hear the voice of wisdom--well done, Lasaad.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/27/2021 4:01:00 PM

Thank you so much, Vijay, appreciate your feedback it's the first time I try this form and I'm glad you like it

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/27/2021 3:12:00 PM

When the soul whispers the eternal truths we have better listen if we wish to become what the Lord wished us to be. Excellent writing my good friend, Lasaad. Blessings.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/27/2021 3:59:00 PM

So true, dearest friend Demetrios, but the fundamental integrity is still in good shape; thanks for your genus visit and comment. I wish you all the best in the coming week.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/27/2021 3:06:00 PM

How delicate the human spirit can be, softly he still hears the bell. nicely done gl in the contest Lasaad.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/27/2021 3:57:00 PM

Thanks, dear Rose, for your kind comment on my poem. Have a wonderful evening.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/27/2021 1:05:00 PM

- Your bell rings wisdom ... well written, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/27/2021 1:24:00 PM

Thanks, dear Anne-Lise, your comment shed more allure on my poem, have a wonderful evening.