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"I've noticed something about most good people, with myself as well sometimes: How maybe life's not all about putting up fences or walls or marking down lines? Maybe life's all about abolishing our obligation to our right, to abuse the privilege of being the master of our destiny. ... Some consume plants, still some hunt on foot, some murder for sport, never bleeding with their game. If I'll not protect this effort; my hope right along with myself and all that is true leaves this world right along with my greed! So, truly now, just what good am I protecting; then? ... 100 words above. ... "Laughing, or lying, no person lives up to these sentiments, all alone!" "One, option": "our Creator says: "Step out; throw the box away!" "Thriving perfection always arrives straight within this moment!" This gambit I've run, funny but have I ever had an option one? Yes, pretty much, I've once thought I'd blazed my own trail! ... To offer our lives is in fact to save a life, whenever and if ever, and whenever we attempt; to hold nothing back! "If I simply will not find my hope through the natural order and raw beauty of all things; being left all by myself, with nothing left to be served, I have left myself; with nothing!" ... Memories are all a tender mixed embellishment of the facts; of our action taken unrighteous, indifferent, or righteous. All taken all against or for a foe, or either way continuing for a friend, albeit even if this is a child, or either way for a woman, or for a man! Either way, that life comes for any of us to share in this effort together; I've always attempted to never remain bitter, about any of this welcome to discover as I have uncovered a plausible and practical faith! As a writer, I get to embellish with everyone upon these treasures. These facts may change the course of yours, someone's life, all included with mine and your very own. I have read some good folks tender simplicities that have changed the very course of this life within me, and all surrounding all of us! This is teaching me faithfully, and fatefully, to remain grateful because we have been surrendered only; one life that with all of us working together, with following the Perfected Will of our Creator for all life; we can make extraordinary! ... "If I simply will not find my hope through the natural order and raw beauty of all things; being left all by myself, with nothing left to be served, I have left myself; with nothing!" To offer our lives is in fact to save a life, whenever and if ever, and whenever we attempt; to hold nothing back! ... Yes, pretty much, I've once thought I'd blazed my own trail! This gambit I've run, funny but have I ever had an option one? "Thriving perfection always arrives straight within this moment!" "One, option": "our Creator says: "Step out; throw the box away!" "Laughing, or lying, no person lives up to these sentiments, all alone!"

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Date: 10/29/2023 5:23:00 PM
I am stunned by the hidden within this fantastic piece of what i will describe as wonder. I wonder what it is that produces the majesty of the written wonder in this your wordery. Dickens' character said to his niece, "Never Wonder!" but oh we must! It produces such elegant yet raw creation. thank you it got me. xxx
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Date: 8/8/2020 9:17:00 AM
Love the graphic imagery of the word placement. Clever.
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