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July 25, 2023 11.45pm

Gone extra mile in just few years Hard work and strong faith roll his gears To overcome trials and fears Now crowned with laurel leaves Though journey was challenging, tough Flourished love, served more than enough All his sacrifices paid off Enjoying glorious heaves Poverty was not a hindrance As long as there’s perseverance Success and victories on hands Achieve what you believe!

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Date: 9/21/2023 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your high finish in the contest, Len. Very powerful poetry, my friend. We miss your lovely poetry, and hope you'll be back soon to post some more. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 9/4/2023 9:54:00 PM
The Extra Mile Contest Judged: 8/29/2023 3:48:00 AM Sponsored by: Charles Messina Place 3 (up to 5th multi-w)
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Date: 9/1/2023 3:03:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Charles' contest. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/4/2023 9:57:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Sara. You're welcome but I thank you more. Sorry for the late expression of gratitude. I'll come and visit you soon, I promise. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/30/2023 2:47:00 PM
An encouraging message, Len! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/4/2023 9:55:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting comments and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Kin. Congratulations as well on your many wins. Sorry for coming so late to reply. I will visit you very soon promise. God bless you always and your writngs. Hugs
Date: 8/29/2023 6:45:00 AM
"All his sacrifices paid off" - great writing. Congratulations!
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/4/2023 8:47:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and congratulatory comments my dear poet friend Christuraj. Congratulation as well in your many wins. Sorry for coming only now. I'll visit you soon ok. Hugs
Date: 8/29/2023 5:54:00 AM
Great message here, Len. Well written! Congratulations on your win! Charlie
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/4/2023 8:46:00 PM
Belated thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Charles. Your approval on my poem through my win means a lot to me. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs.
Date: 7/30/2023 10:51:00 PM
Thank you for writing this Len' A strong message, we can relate To! I trust you are well.? God bless.'
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/7/2023 11:02:00 PM
As always, so busy in school my dear poet friend Joe. Sorry for just coming now. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words. God bless you always too and your writings. Hugs

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