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Extra Eyes On Top of My Head

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Following the conclusion of my foresight illusion. Wait! Where was I headed? My cogwheel brain’s in seclusion. 9/5/2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/7/2021 3:51:00 AM

So much sparkly truth!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2021 4:22:00 AM

Thank you!

Brian Strand

Date: 9/6/2021 12:51:00 AM

Often happens Kim..to poets

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2021 5:18:00 AM

For sure!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/5/2021 3:42:00 PM

Tick-tock might help you today! lol. Great one, Kim. Love it. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2021 5:17:00 PM

I saw you wrote a rubai…looked it up, thought I’d try it. Thank you, my friend!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/5/2021 11:12:00 AM

The cogs are supposed to work in a perfect manner. Occasionally it goes work way.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2021 5:18:00 PM

As we get older our cogs don’t work as well ;) LOL

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/5/2021 11:10:00 AM

Just another instance of thoughts' elusion. Cleverly written, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2021 5:18:00 PM

Thank you, dear Evelyn!

Marilene Evans

Date: 9/5/2021 9:34:00 AM

Yes, we always need those extra eyes or our sixth sense, called common sense. Have a Blessed Sunday.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2021 10:17:00 AM

I love all the responses! Fun, including yours! Truly common sense has left the building! Bless you, Marilene!

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/5/2021 7:40:00 AM

wow which chakra is that one?? great one Kim. We all need those extra eyes.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2021 10:17:00 AM

LOL…thanks!

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/5/2021 7:23:00 AM

It resonates with me deeply, Kim. I think I, too, need those extra eyes every day, and I seem to forget the most important things.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2021 10:16:00 AM

Yes and also the imagery of those of us who leave our glasses on our heads while we are looking for them…lol. Thanks so much, Lasaad! <3

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/5/2021 7:21:00 AM

Great one Kim! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2021 10:15:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi!