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Extra Eyes On Top of My Head

Following the conclusion
of my foresight illusion.
Wait! Where was I headed?
My cogwheel brain’s in seclusion.

9/5/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 3:51 AM
So much sparkly truth!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 4:22 AM
Thank you!
Strand Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 12:51 AM
Often happens Kim..to poets
Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 5:18 AM
For sure!
Wolf Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 3:42 PM
Tick-tock might help you today! lol. Great one, Kim. Love it. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 5:17 PM
I saw you wrote a rubai…looked it up, thought I’d try it. Thank you, my friend!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 11:12 AM
The cogs are supposed to work in a perfect manner. Occasionally it goes work way.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 5:18 PM
As we get older our cogs don’t work as well ;) LOL
Buehler Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 11:10 AM
Just another instance of thoughts' elusion. Cleverly written, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 5:18 PM
Thank you, dear Evelyn!
Evans Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Yes, we always need those extra eyes or our sixth sense, called common sense. Have a Blessed Sunday.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 10:17 AM
I love all the responses! Fun, including yours! Truly common sense has left the building! Bless you, Marilene!
Kaufman Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 7:40 AM
wow which chakra is that one?? great one Kim. We all need those extra eyes.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 10:17 AM
LOL…thanks!
Poet Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 7:23 AM
It resonates with me deeply, Kim. I think I, too, need those extra eyes every day, and I seem to forget the most important things.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 10:16 AM
Yes and also the imagery of those of us who leave our glasses on our heads while we are looking for them…lol. Thanks so much, Lasaad! <3
Sands Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 7:21 AM
Great one Kim! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 10:15 AM
Thank you, Heidi!
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