Extra Extra! Newborn Speaks!

i had a date to be born on this date
i can't understate, i just couldn't wait
it was my fate
my goal to gain weight
ain't that great
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Greenhough Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 4:15 PM
Interesting look at babies. Most grow fast.
Crandall Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 4:35 PM
Yep, seems like they double in size in about the first month!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 11:08 AM
Kind of funny! Yes, a newborn must gain weight…a goal…they know nothing of goals at that time. They will say, “I need to get back to my girlish (obviously for a girl) figure but they don’t weigh in under adolescence.
Crandall Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 1:04 PM
haha, hmm, yeah, a little early to be thinking about goals!
Allison Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 1:00 PM
lol I wonder what a baby would say if it could talk from birth! hugs jan xx
Crandall Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 1:06 PM
haha!
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