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Poetic Form: Verse

Inspired: 2023 October 10

*3rd Place*
How you are feeling today - one liner
Contest Judged: 2023 October 15
Sponsored by: Silent One

Image: Smart Hospital Room in a Box by Admares (sensing surviving)

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

Room number four white wall squared times glass door trim looks like the symbol pi~~I count

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/17/2023 10:24:00 AM

I'm thrilled you are extant William. I do hope you are well and happy. Congratulations on your win! :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/17/2023 10:43:00 AM

I agree with your uplifting conclusions wholeheartedly, Linda! I feel great, my friend! Blessings to your generous expressions, and have a great day too! Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2023 11:16:00 AM

sorry you have to be there still. Congrats on the win

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/17/2023 4:52:00 AM

Pic a bit deceptive, Andrea, as it's missing its mummy--partially mummified. The staff's interest in my poems on PS allowed them to post my thoughts on the computer. Thanks aplenty, my friend, Aloha

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2023 8:36:00 AM

Hope you are feeling better today.. Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/15/2023 8:59:00 AM

It's been months since I got to the hospital, and now I'm recuperating in isolation. At least I got to see my family, who had occasionally visited me from the States. I enjoyed your contest, Silent One, though not its content--knowing my meaning. Aloha, William