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A work of art laboriously created exquisitely spun silken magic, dainty looking do not let this fool you she is strong enough to survive most rain storms, and study enough to capture prey her maker sits close by as to not scare lunch beads of water from last night help her shimmer and dazzle the tiny bugs are intrigued mesmerized, they begin to climb toward their final destination. mother spider arrives in time to wrap them carefully lunch and supper

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Date: 4/9/2021 10:32:00 AM
I presume you are describing a spider web here? If so, then you have written this quite well.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/9/2021 8:44:00 PM
Thank you, you are correct.
Date: 4/9/2021 8:17:00 AM
I like this one a lot, Caren, but I have to admit I don't understand it. Is it a metaphor some someone? Or, have I completely missed the target?
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/9/2021 8:44:00 PM
It is a spider web.

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