Exquisite

You my undying lover Are a marvel to behold No life without you Our story is untold Long ago and faraway Lonely souls met For hunger and pleasure The stage was set Reclusive cabin on A mountain top Silk linens dark curtains Sex that didn’t stop Skinny dipping In the pond Such pleasure All night long To breathe of you Again my soul Would fill my need Entwined as a whole Curtains did not Open for days

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matthew adams

Date: 1/28/2024 5:48:00 PM

This poem stirs memories of the first few moments in a new relationship. Thanks for sharing.

Kelli White
Date: 2/26/2024 6:57:00 AM

Thank you Matthew, you are so right, kelli

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 12/30/2023 5:56:00 PM

Kelli, your passionate verses evoke a timeless love story. The intensity of your words reveals a bond beyond measure. The vivid imagery of secluded moments paints a picture of intimacy and longing. Your poetic portrayal of love's depth and the yearning for reunion echoes profoundly, leaving an indelible impression of an unbreakable connection. - Blessing Daniel

Kelli White
Date: 12/30/2023 6:01:00 PM

Thank you very much for your understanding and reading my poem so well, happy new year, Kelli

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/30/2023 1:37:00 PM

Beautifully written. A great poem, Kelli. :)

Kelli White
Date: 12/30/2023 1:52:00 PM

Thank you if only poems could come true, happy new year, Kelli

Silent One

Date: 12/30/2023 10:03:00 AM

Your lover sound amazing Kelli...

Kelli White
Date: 12/30/2023 1:31:00 PM

The imaginary lovers are always the best SO. Fictional, happy new year my friend, Kelli