Exquisite

You my undying lover
Are a marvel to behold
No life without you
Our story is untold
Long ago and faraway 
Lonely souls met
For hunger and pleasure 
The stage was set
Reclusive cabin on
A mountain top
Silk linens dark curtains
Sex that didn’t stop
Skinny dipping
In the pond
Such pleasure 
All night long
To breathe of you
Again my soul
Would fill my need
Entwined as a whole



Curtains did not 
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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adams Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 5:48 PM
This poem stirs memories of the first few moments in a new relationship. Thanks for sharing.
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February 26, 2024 at 6:57 AM
Thank you Matthew, you are so right, kelli
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December 30, 2023 at 5:56 PM
Kelli, your passionate verses evoke a timeless love story. The intensity of your words reveals a bond beyond measure. The vivid imagery of secluded moments paints a picture of intimacy and longing. Your poetic portrayal of love's depth and the yearning for reunion echoes profoundly, leaving an indelible impression of an unbreakable connection. - Blessing Daniel
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December 30, 2023 at 6:01 PM
Thank you very much for your understanding and reading my poem so well, happy new year, Kelli
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December 30, 2023 at 1:37 PM
Beautifully written. A great poem, Kelli. :)
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December 30, 2023 at 1:52 PM
Thank you if only poems could come true, happy new year, Kelli
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December 30, 2023 at 10:03 AM
Your lover sound amazing Kelli...
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December 30, 2023 at 1:31 PM
The imaginary lovers are always the best SO. Fictional, happy new year my friend, Kelli
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