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Expression of Taste

candle light dinner under the stars - bees taste the cabernet

8/24/2020


When Plans Don't Go To Plan Poetry Contest
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Goldsmith Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 9:52 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your poem and picture. I wish I was there. So peaceful and pretty. Enjoy you win and your day...............
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 2:47 PM
I remember this fun one, Eve. Back with congrats.
Wolf Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 8:42 PM
Back with congrats to you, Eve, on this monoku, which is just perfect for the contest. The bees insure that plans are 'not to bee.' Kudos, Gershon
Woodrow Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 2:03 PM
lol! so much for the romantic plans! I remember the first time we were camping and I discovered meat bees...horrid things! Why can't they be more like honey bees...I liked the humor in this win..Congratulations :)
Pandit Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 1:51 PM
Congrats on your podium win, Eve--I can picture the scene.
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 1:17 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning line, Eve :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 11:16 AM
Congratulations on your win, Eve!! Visual imagery rains in this monoku, and gustatory imagery, too!!
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 5:06 AM
Drunk bees are a menace! More than men! Congrats on your win! I love your picture! Must try that for a Christmas evening!
One Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 2:53 AM
Damn those bees! Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 5:48 PM
Aw, I hate when stuff like that happens. I say to those pests: 'Let It Be!' ~ Paul McCartney
Andresen Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 4:47 PM
- Always something that must go wrong ... whether it is bees or mosquitoes - Good luck in the contest, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 3:05 PM
Love this one, Eve.
Deepa Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 7:17 AM
Beautiful arrangement interrupted by bees ..:-( lovely monoko Eve mam..Good luck for the contest.I believe your doing well.Take care.Much love.:-)
Mccabe Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 3:15 PM
May I take your slow-bled illuminated phrasing as a most welcome invitation? But, only as you please, my tempting apple, Eve.
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