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Expressed Vessel

Corrugated box with floppy wings howling from a gape--that mournful dog. My duty manifests threads unraveled by revelation in Svetlana's isolated face laminated on cardboard, pleading with me to share a phantom dance as her tension wanders in tepid waters; distance compels skating ambition until scandalous betrayal spits brutal retribution, jealous rage and sharpened jabs to expel vicious silence. He debates the scoundrel in the mirror, eyes defiant: refuse to surrender, shred the doll and bundle those discarded husks, conceal the torment-- shed the flesh down the drain to Truman Reservoir. Daddy guards your journey never vanquished, yet balking, Svetlana’s skull in the trunk-- a boulder too great to throw. "Mommy will be okay," pins down his mantra. Mercy secures wings with a blabbering tape gun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/22/2009 6:43:00 AM
Yes, intense, pulling... the flow again... succinct... all the way to the ending.... kudos John
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Date: 4/20/2009 6:24:00 AM
very very intense, I pray.."Mommy will be ok." Light & Love
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Date: 4/19/2009 8:45:00 AM
There is a strong feeling of Appollinaire in this. The imagery certainly does conjour that. But even more the works of the Soviet 'absudists', such as Danil Kahms. You seem to have taken a story and pared it down to the bare bones until it doesn't make sense and yet there is a sense to it. This is a powerful piece of poetry.
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Date: 4/18/2009 7:15:00 PM
The imagery is impressive, nice word use and great as always...Raul
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Date: 4/18/2009 10:55:00 AM
Another great one!
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