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Stone Wall Ruins Viv for WTF? : r/Vivarium

Exposed to Peace

Silver fish swim through
the quiet air of the mind—
opulent chaos,
where the noisy sun sleeps now
and the moss whispers to stones.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 11, 2026 at 2:44 PM
captivating -- especially liked the last two lines.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 11, 2026 at 3:35 PM
I like it too.
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