Sara Kendrick Poet Rubaiyat

Exposed Stars

Cool and crisp eve lighted by exposed stars
A nearly full moon; a quiet that's ours
Through dark  bare limbs of silhouetted oak
Moments shared thinking of our time to part

Will the hands of midnight be soon to stroke
And one of us will wear the mourning cloak?
Alas, my night love let's together depart  
To the Son lit city by His call envoked

Our night love flowing from an open heart
Let's enter our night that work of love's art
Come into the twilight let's slowly walk
Into night's dwelling never to depart


Finis' interlocking
Rubaiyat form..

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Contest: Into Night's Dwelling
Written January 13, 2014
Poet: Sara Kendrick

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Dr.Ram Mehta January 16, 2014 at 9:24 PM Lovely thoughtful write on the theme of the contest and congratulations on the fine win, Sara

Joseph May January 16, 2014 at 10:42 AM Congrats on a fine win Sara

Ken Carroll January 13, 2014 at 2:29 PM Hi Sara, A most serene write from you.. Ken

Mustapha Mohammed January 13, 2014 at 1:53 PM ''Through dark bare limbs of silhouetted oaks''....such a wonderful phrase Sara.

Gautami Phookan January 13, 2014 at 12:19 PM This reads fantastic, Sara! and interlocking form... is even better. Shall be back to read again. love! hugs!

Harry Horsman January 13, 2014 at 11:31 AM wow Sara, this is so good, your ability to cover almost all subject matter is amazing.....

Russell Sivey January 13, 2014 at 10:07 AM This is a fantastic write my friend! I truly loved reading this tremendous poem this morning! What a lovely piece, I look forward to reading the entire poem, Great Work!!