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exposed from under the sheets underclothes and socks the chill of the morning the smell of bacon not likely a cup of coffee absolutely goes down the frozen pipes hopefully into the appendages the major arteries and rural pathways to fingertips and toes the nose usually remains cold 10/19/2022

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Date: 10/20/2022 8:24:00 AM
oh my gosh, Kim! Having once lived in a cold climate, my nose was always cold, and thick socks were a must! That's a beautiful photo you've chosen to accompany your poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2022 8:50:00 AM
Thank you, Jenna!
Date: 10/20/2022 6:22:00 AM
This is as delicious and warming as the cup of coffee I'm sipping now. SO GOOD!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2022 7:16:00 AM
Thank you, Becky! :)
Date: 10/20/2022 12:09:00 AM
Lol sounds like you're thawing out with coffee Kim, lol.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2022 4:59:00 AM
and headed for Minnesota, to visit my son, soon. Definitely will need my cup then! LOL
Date: 10/19/2022 10:53:00 PM
Coffee seems to work miracles. Is that a sneeze? :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2022 4:59:00 AM
lol…no sneeze. After I wrote this, my husband commented that my nose was cold..funny, right?!
Date: 10/19/2022 10:00:00 PM
We need better distributors in our bodies, perhaps. I'll call 'Mort's Body Shop,' and see if they have any 2023's in yet...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2022 4:56:00 AM
Mort meaning death? lol

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