Explosion of Death

Battle field
It's the earthly womb
Poor soldiers
For less fit weapons
Practice solo deaths!

14.06.2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 10:54 PM
The last line is masterfully done.
Wolf Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 7:05 PM
Nice turn of phrase -- 'battlefield, the earthly womb.' Thanks, Mahtab. Cheers, Gershon
Neels Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 4:49 AM
So true Well penned
Hawkins Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 12:33 AM
Poor Soldiers indeed ... Well penned Mahtab ...
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