Explanation

The innocence of my beloved cannot be explained
The purity of her speech cannot be explained.

Every step is bewildering & miraculous.
The fog in the transparent glass cannot be explained.

How I wish I was the same old commoner!
The unwanted change in my life cannot be explained

Rest assured, this world has indeed finished.
The silence at my suffering cannot be explained.

'Mumtaz' you lack charisma which others possess.
Your existence in this dubious world cannot be explained.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Salehi Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 8:12 PM
Hi,your poem is beautiful, but it is not ghazal (cannot be explained is refrain, the repeating part) your ghazal is missing "the rhyme"you have to make a rhyme with the word beloved on the first line. Check the site there is a good explanation about ghazal.
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June 4, 2017 at 4:30 PM
Thank you for your correction. Many thanks
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