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Written: September 12, 2023 _______________________________________________________________ Sunsets Paint the Sky Embracing flames of loved ones~ Memories aglow. Shared dawning vibrant Now distant, yet remembered~ Love never fades out Sultry afternoons, zest height turns to modest warmth~ Winter's smooth embrace Awaiting midnight Living among sunsets' glow~ Embrace memories

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Date: 9/14/2023 12:27:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and I liked it!
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Date: 9/13/2023 7:56:00 AM
Your haiku writes are definitely one of the bestest and my favs, dear Sotto! This splendid write shimmering with sunset shades has fascinated my soul to dive deeper in those pastel hues of afterglow. "Love never fades out" I absolutely love that thought, yes it doesn't fade.. "Sunsets Paint the Sky embracing flames of loved ones~" So beautiful are your word choices, expressing such deep emotions within such few words.. Absolutely phenomenal! A pleasure to read your work always!
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Date: 9/13/2023 5:59:00 AM
Beautiful images with a touch of emotions adorn your haiku poems, my friend. Well done!
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Date: 9/13/2023 5:52:00 AM
-"Living among sunsets' glow" ... "love never fades out"... beautiful written, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 9/13/2023 1:36:00 AM
Dear Sotto, i too believe this, love never fades out, true love always lingers. And as someone that finds beauty and something different in every sunset, I absolutely enjoyed reading your haikus. They are soul warming and uplifting and so poetic. I especially love “ flames of loved ones” what a way to think of sunsets.. memories sometimes they visit us in various forms and shade’s through nature. Impeccable and moving write that I absolutely loved reading as always.
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Date: 9/12/2023 10:33:00 PM
Another wonderful set of Haikus. Also deserves a Favorite. You certainly are on a roll with these Haikus dear friend they are magnificent,
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Date: 9/12/2023 8:44:00 PM
Outstanding Haikus that mirror autumn. Even better …your artistry as a poet is quite impressive. Am FAVING these, right now…. Thank-you for the image as well! Pangie xxx
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