Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Experiment

Dearest
 
            I was your experiment
            If it does not
            Work out,
            Bin it
 
            Your Guinea pig,
            in lying to me
           With no emotion,
          Years of hard work 
         Flushed down the toilet
 
           Like a statue
         Non moving emotions,
        Cold to the core
         You left
 
Stop
             Your finger prints
            deep in my brain
           Scratching like claws
         You gave me hell,
       Stop hurting me
 
I
 
           do not like
         This experiment
        Put the shoe
        On the other,
Hurt
 
            if only you knew,
             Yes the other foot
                It took so long to see
                  happier now

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Charmaine Chircop September 2, 2013 at 6:32 AM This poem evokes emotion of sadness.When love is not reciprocated by those We care for..It hurts deep..Cuts like a knife leaving just scars of past bleeding wounds..Powerful poem..Tnks for reading 'I lay me to sleep' Liam Mcdaid September 2, 2013 at 6:57 AM I LEAVE FOR YOU FROM THE OCEAN A TEARDROP HAPPINESS SMILES BEAUTIFUL THANK YOU DEEPLY APPRECIATED FROM THE HEART

Mustapha Mohammed September 2, 2013 at 6:31 AM Really enjoyed reading this one this morning partner. Nicely crafted. I hope all is well with you. Liam Mcdaid September 2, 2013 at 7:00 AM COULD NOT BE BETTER MY FRIEND FREE FROM CHAINS THE WORLD SMILES ON YOU THANK YOU MY FRIEND ALWAYS A PLEASURE HAVE A BEAUTIFUL DAY BLESSINGS