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Expendable For a Cause

A young man carrying a green duffel bag over his shoulder shifts when he walks. Off to war for our country and flag. No military knowledge with little talk. Enemy troops marched across the bridge, with tanks, and hundreds of machine guns led. As he sat dug in along and across the ridge, bullets were zipping right over his head. The dawn of the morning across the glen; a plan was thought, bargain it was, the loss of two companies to stop a million men and ten thousand vehicles from getting across Pop, pop pop, of distant sounds and then more, trading volleys of gunfire with blood and gore A friend gets killed and he dies to the core, trembling with raging fire. A Casualty of war
5/24/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Bateman Avatar
June 24, 2017 at 5:02 PM
Hello Eve, This one's an instant FAVE for me!! As a retired U.S. military veteran, with my own set of experiences, your words here carry even more weight. War is never a pleasant thing although Hollywood likes to glamorize it at times. At this stage in my life, "I always hope and pray for peace and understanding." Superb Work!! Best Always, Gary
Roper Avatar
June 24, 2017 at 6:00 PM
Thank you, Gary.... so many lost at that time...
Gupta Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 6:49 AM
While enjoying the rhyme and poetry, we turn thoughtful too at the back of our mind ... subtle impressions ... very nice ...
Nair Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 2:49 AM
It is a compact work, rhyming so well, while catching the action.
Vaso Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 11:46 PM
Hello Eve this is such a tremendous well written poem on the topic! Really this is also a fav for me!!
Roper Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 11:50 PM
Thank you, Arthur, alway love you dropping in and reading my work Hugs dear friend ~*
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