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Expectations

Withered is love and fading as the light does in winter without control or knowing it dissolves disappears and haunts ghostly as reflection hanging just above watchers heads and shoulders slightly above hearts just below understanding between hoping and growing glimpse the burned image remember the outline and search among unfamiliar faces for a recognition of desire and wanting while running through the rain mindless obsessed and cold to discover mocking wisdom tainting the ideal and feeding the passion for passion

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Date: 5/23/2009 10:46:00 PM
ok you seriously make me love you more and more with all of your poetry! this is simply the best in my opinion except the first one i read i is my favorite! again your opening lines hooked me, made me hungry for more, you know how to keep your readers attention and the way you describe your thoughts to us in mind blowing. the way you described all the places love is was exquisite i loved ever moment of it. i think i must make this another fav!
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Date: 5/23/2009 10:46:00 PM
cont ' keep it up justin, you are truly a wonder and a treasure.
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