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Expect the Unexpected

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "HAILSTORM" came - UNKNOWN "PHILIPPINES" - ruined NATION TROPICAL COUNTRY... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2011 1:28:00 AM

wow! to the haiku... i was wondering if you have some time right now... i have a question about your poem.... can you please let me know on a comment you are still here on the soup ~~ so i may send you soup mail.... Linda55ay

The Fringe

Date: 7/7/2011 11:05:00 PM

My brother's car here in the United States was ruined too by hail just last month. He doesn't believe in God. Now he's in the Philippines. haha. I hope this isn't God's wrath striking down those who ask questions. hahahaha.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/3/2011 12:04:00 PM

i remember dashes of sleet 2 decades back, jun... a dramatic offering; greeat stuff! galeng naman! :) huggs, nette

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/3/2011 9:30:00 AM

I was supposed to ask where was this-- then I saw your replies below, where you say it's a dream ;) almost got me as well, jun-jun ;) but hmm actually there have been isolated incidents of hail here? I distinctly remember one time when I was about 7 or 8? We had experienced hail-- freaky but also cool... enjoyed reading this and thank you for your encouraging comments :D

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/3/2011 7:13:00 AM

brilliant visuals jun-jun.. sad for the destruction of a beauty nation luv.. but happy u have penned this rare beauty.. so many poets on PS come from Philippines... luv..

Jun-Jun Villanueva
Date: 7/3/2011 7:42:00 AM

this is just a dream, in my yesterday night.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/3/2011 6:13:00 AM

This does sound devastating, my that must of been scary to watch and go thru.... very good Haiku....Michael

Jun-Jun Villanueva
Date: 7/3/2011 7:43:00 AM

this is just a dream

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/3/2011 5:28:00 AM

I guess I haven't been watching the news very closely, Jun-Jun, but this Hailstorm sounds devastating. Excellent haiku! Thanks for your kind comments. Love, Carolyn (Check out my Unsolved Mysteries Contest)

Jun-Jun Villanueva
Date: 7/3/2011 7:42:00 AM

this is just a dream