Expect the Unexpected

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"HAILSTORM" came - UNKNOWN
                            "PHILIPPINES" - ruined NATION
                                                                    TROPICAL COUNTRY...


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 14, 2011 at 1:28 AM
wow! to the haiku... i was wondering if you have some time right now... i have a question about your poem.... can you please let me know on a comment you are still here on the soup ~~ so i may send you soup mail.... Linda55ay
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July 7, 2011 at 11:05 PM
My brother's car here in the United States was ruined too by hail just last month. He doesn't believe in God. Now he's in the Philippines. haha. I hope this isn't God's wrath striking down those who ask questions. hahahaha.
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July 3, 2011 at 12:04 PM
i remember dashes of sleet 2 decades back, jun... a dramatic offering; greeat stuff! galeng naman! :) huggs, nette
K. Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 9:30 AM
I was supposed to ask where was this-- then I saw your replies below, where you say it's a dream ;) almost got me as well, jun-jun ;) but hmm actually there have been isolated incidents of hail here? I distinctly remember one time when I was about 7 or 8? We had experienced hail-- freaky but also cool... enjoyed reading this and thank you for your encouraging comments :D
Sweetheart Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 7:13 AM
brilliant visuals jun-jun.. sad for the destruction of a beauty nation luv.. but happy u have penned this rare beauty.. so many poets on PS come from Philippines... luv..
Villanueva Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 7:42 AM
this is just a dream, in my yesterday night.
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July 3, 2011 at 6:13 AM
This does sound devastating, my that must of been scary to watch and go thru.... very good Haiku....Michael
Villanueva Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 7:43 AM
this is just a dream
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July 3, 2011 at 5:28 AM
I guess I haven't been watching the news very closely, Jun-Jun, but this Hailstorm sounds devastating. Excellent haiku! Thanks for your kind comments. Love, Carolyn (Check out my Unsolved Mysteries Contest)
Villanueva Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 7:42 AM
this is just a dream
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