Notes About The Poem

Expanding Santa

There was once a fat Santa Claus felt

That his Mrs Claus wanted him svelte

But the wiggle and jelly

That so jiggled his belly

Was the thing made her icicles melt.





~ 5th Place ~  in the the "Holiday Themed Limerick" Poetry Contest, Tania Kitchin, Judge & Sponsor.

( Syllables = 9, 9, 7, 7, 9 - counted at HowManySyllables.com )
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 6:54 PM
cute one, Greg. Congrats. Wish I had more time here to send you a soupie!
Na Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:50 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Greg
Kitchin Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:28 PM
Greg, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny limerick!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 8:15 PM
Oh my gosh...lol!
Na Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 2:03 PM
Hi Greg nice little tribute lol. Thanks for sharing this. Best of luck in the contest
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 1:26 PM
Hello Gregory Barden, poor Santa.... Have a nice day my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 11:36 AM
So very sweet, Gregory. More to love.
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