Exotique

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respondents thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation

EXOTIQUE
romantic liasons
in
an
emotional life
pf
beating heart
& eyes
with tears

breatless
then melancholy
a discernible
thread
in a
fascinating fantasy
surrounded
& adorned
with a
sense
of the
dramatic

a faltering
freedom
vibrant
yet eccentric
&histronic
disolved
into
the naturalistic
&
transformed
to
a prosaic
identity

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