Exorcising a Nightmare

when a dream seeped
into a dome of light,
I was already leaping
with tale of grand sights


I was falling into
days consciousness 
but a demonic spell
had begun to possess


in a depth of sleep
in the quietest dark,
I felt a presence
slide to make a spark


a nightmare of jowls
shadowed his face,
then his slimy fingers
stuck into my grace


he took my thoughts
on a hellish ride,
I was hoping my mind
didn’t burst open wide
 
the torture of angels
struggling on the racks,
was matched by the faeries
whip-marks on their backs


the mushrooms of love
had fungus and warts,
a cathedral of dreams
slipped out of all thought


with unicorns hobbled
and chains on their legs,
the elves head bandages
held together with pegs 


the beautiful sights
I had run back to tell,
was lost in a nightmare
as I was living in hell


but endless this horror
well, it wasn’t to be,
as I write this poem
that dream is set free


but that’s not to say
that it wont return,
as I sleep in the night
dreams start to burn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/6/2010 5:57:00 AM
The reoccuring nightmare it seems, it read like a short story Jayne >> James
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:40:00 AM
8th stanza was my fave,, enjoyed this one
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