Exit of Eden

Welcome to my garden,child
I'm sssure you will be pleasssed
With all my flowersss growing
and my enchanted apple treesss
Follow me to the orchard
ssso you may underssstand
All the knowledge to be given if
you only take the chance
Your bright eyesss glow with wonder
and curious anxiety
SSSo bite into thisss apple and
you will truly sssee what isss to be....

The heavensss fall to darknesss
for your Father had forbode
You decieved hisss only warning from
the liesss you have been told
You had everything you've needed
and ssso you wanted more
You face,now,my obscuritiesss
Your Father closed the door
I am the ssserpent of this world
called devil,demon,sssin
You have fallen to my prey
for I have sssucked you in
The firssst lessson you have learned
from wisssdom you have sssought
Do not ever trussst a sssnake
for all sssoulsss can be bought!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/10/2011 12:55:00 AM
Pat, a very cleverly written poem.I'll be watching for more of your poems.Crossfox- Bill
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Date: 9/11/2011 1:31:00 AM
Thank you very much.I wrote that one when I was in my late twenties and have written others similar to Exit.I will be sure to post them when I can.Thanks again!
Date: 9/6/2011 10:58:00 PM
A very pleasssed poem.. I was entertained all the way from the welcome to your ending thought of not trusting ... enjoyed, , thanks 4 sharing! ....Linda
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Date: 9/11/2011 1:35:00 AM
Thank you very much and I am glad you enjoyed it.I will be sure to post some more you might like and I will also check out yours as well.Thanks again!
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