Exit of Eden

Welcome to my garden,child I'm sssure you will be pleasssed With all my flowersss growing and my enchanted apple treesss Follow me to the orchard ssso you may underssstand All the knowledge to be given if you only take the chance Your bright eyesss glow with wonder and curious anxiety SSSo bite into thisss apple and you will truly sssee what isss to be.... The heavensss fall to darknesss for your Father had forbode You decieved hisss only warning from the liesss you have been told You had everything you've needed and ssso you wanted more You face,now,my obscuritiesss Your Father closed the door I am the ssserpent of this world called devil,demon,sssin You have fallen to my prey for I have sssucked you in The firssst lessson you have learned from wisssdom you have sssought Do not ever trussst a sssnake for all sssoulsss can be bought!!!

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William Crocker

Date: 9/10/2011 12:55:00 AM

Pat, a very cleverly written poem.I'll be watching for more of your poems.Crossfox- Bill

Pat Mccoy
Date: 9/11/2011 1:31:00 AM

Thank you very much.I wrote that one when I was in my late twenties and have written others similar to Exit.I will be sure to post them when I can.Thanks again!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/6/2011 10:58:00 PM

A very pleasssed poem.. I was entertained all the way from the welcome to your ending thought of not trusting ... enjoyed, , thanks 4 sharing! ....Linda

Pat Mccoy
Date: 9/11/2011 1:35:00 AM

Thank you very much and I am glad you enjoyed it.I will be sure to post some more you might like and I will also check out yours as well.Thanks again!