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I wish I wasnt here to hear your voice It shouts through my brain That sometimes I wanna go insane I dont like it when you put me down Or when you always make me cry I'm through with you I dont your s**t anymore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/31/2009 8:56:00 PM
Alexz, you write very well. You are honest and sincere with your feelings. With the exception of your last line of this poem...I think you are genuinely talented. I would really look forward to you writing a poem for my new Member contest..."My First Kiss'. You have a supressed talent, Alexz. Open it up and and make it shine. Peace always, John
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Date: 1/13/2009 8:32:00 AM
Great! :)
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Date: 1/5/2009 9:35:00 AM
Sheesh! ...give him the boot! ...PLEASE!! Don't let anybody get in the way of you being YOU! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/4/2009 3:13:00 PM
What are you up to.?, me, about to eat. cant wait....
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Date: 1/4/2009 1:36:00 PM
hey rebel, you've got mail
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Date: 1/3/2009 4:09:00 PM
great way of releasing some tensions and really getting down to real pain relief by way of poetry. enjoyed reading it.
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