Existing

I wish I wasnt here to hear your voice
It shouts through my brain
That sometimes I wanna go insane
I dont like it when you put me down
Or when you always make me cry
I'm through with you
I dont your s**t anymore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Heck Avatar
January 31, 2009 at 8:56 PM
Alexz, you write very well. You are honest and sincere with your feelings. With the exception of your last line of this poem...I think you are genuinely talented. I would really look forward to you writing a poem for my new Member contest..."My First Kiss'. You have a supressed talent, Alexz. Open it up and and make it shine. Peace always, John
Montgomery Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 8:32 AM
Great! :)
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 9:35 AM
Sheesh! ...give him the boot! ...PLEASE!! Don't let anybody get in the way of you being YOU! Best wishes, Keith
Burton Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 3:13 PM
What are you up to.?, me, about to eat. cant wait....
Loving Iii Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 1:36 PM
hey rebel, you've got mail
Burton Avatar
January 3, 2009 at 4:09 PM
great way of releasing some tensions and really getting down to real pain relief by way of poetry. enjoyed reading it.
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