Existential Uncertainty

Beneath a sky of uncommitted rain,
I walk through streets where windows hold no names;
the city flickers like a dying vein
inside the wrist of midnight’s restless frame.

The moon hangs loose, a lantern without shore,
adrift upon the blackened tide of doubt;
each star appears a nail in Heaven’s door,
yet none can tell what waits beyond or out.

I am a suitcase left on some old train,
tagged by forgotten hands and foreign dust;
the years pass through me softly like cold rain
through roofs abandoned long ago to rust.

Sometimes existence feels a borrowed coat
stitched from the shadows of uncertain seams;
we button up our fragile human throat
and speak in currencies of borrowed dreams.

The mind becomes a forest after fire,
charcoal branches sketching broken prayer;
while somewhere underneath the buried mire,
small roots of meaning twist through ruined air.

And still we rise.
Like ships with cracked compasses glowing,
we cross the fog because the heart keeps rowing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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George Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 8:34 PM
Beyond the existential angst, we keep moving forward as 'small roots of meaning twist through ruined air' and our vessel keeps cutting through the fog. Life is never smooth, but we brave all hardships. A great poem, dear Jay ji
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June 3, 2026 at 7:42 AM
Hello Jay, That phrase "a sky of uncommitted rain" perfectly captures the psychological limbo of existential doubt, where the world feels suspended and entirely indifferent. The third stanza I am a suitcase left on some old train, tagged by forgotten hands and foreign dust beautifully isolates that sense of alienation feeling like a vessel of time and displacement, watching the years pass through like rain through a rusted roof. We might not have a perfect map, a clear sky, or a functioning guide, but the fact that the heart keeps rowing through the fog is what keeps us intact. Blessings, Daniel
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June 3, 2026 at 2:29 AM
Excellent, beautifully crafted verse, Jay.
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