Exhausting the Colors of the Day

EXHAUSTING THE COLORS OF THE DAY

Twilight trees lowing,
    in the splendiferous lilac sky,

               invisible to the inhabitants,
            gathered round a late night supper.

A roof peeks into the camera’s eye —
       the home’s beneath the sculptor’s scene.

             I wonder if the Creator’s florid ink
leaks into their minds,

as they break bread and clasp hands,
           and the night sky squeezes hues

                    of pink, purple and gray,
exhausting its supply for the day?

2/15/2017
Sunrise and Sunset Contest/Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Beautiful, Kim. Congrats on your #1 win.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Thank you, Line!
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February 19, 2018 at 3:21 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your win
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Ashley Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:33 PM
Oh such beautiful imagery Kim. Congratulations on your wonderful win with your lovely and expressive poem. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 8:24 PM
Thank you so much, Susan!
Cunningham Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:10 PM
Congratulations to you Kim. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 8:23 PM
Thanks, Tom!
Haight Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:00 PM
Lovely poem, Kim. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 8:23 PM
Thanks, my friend!
Leiser Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Congrats on your win with this fine poem, Kim! Enjoyed :)
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February 18, 2018 at 4:51 PM
Thank you, Laura!
One Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:08 PM
Fantastic imagery Kim.. congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 4:50 PM
Thank you so much! I hope your daughter had fun with judging!
Andresen Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:07 PM
- A piece of art from nature and your pen, Kim :) ... Big congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 4:51 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise!
Pandit Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 6:17 AM
Lovely flow of beautiful words..you captured the sunset in your creation...best for a win, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay!
Tripp Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 11:38 PM
I now feel like I'm missing so much beauty this cold Michigan winter as I hate venturing outside. This is a bit of a wake up call for me to enjoy the sunset colors. Very beautiful write, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Thank you, Rhoda!
Gauthier Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 9:42 PM
what an awesome line, Kim: "I wonder if the Creator’s florid ink leaks into their minds". Love it.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 9:44 PM
Thanks, Line! You are always so encouraging!
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