Exhausted

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"Finding fault is for those with tired minds." Rumi exhausted gnarled oak lets go.... winter arrives

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/2/2023 7:21:00 AM

I feel you, very well expressed, heartfelt haiku here. I love “ gnarled oak lets go” and how you’ve ended it! Brilliant. Sending you light today and always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/2/2023 7:31:00 AM

IE, I need the light to shine on me. Thanks for your visit and your encouragement. I like the word brilliant. Sara