Notes About The Poem

I resurrected my original poetic form and renamed it to ‘Lipassonet’, appropriating its former ‘Tearassoncenet’—a combination of poetic forms involving a Lipogram and a Sonnet.  In a lipogram, where the objective is the omission of the writer's chosen vowel from their text, yet in Lipassonet, that concept is reversed, whereby the chosen vowel is maximized; therefore, it will influence the vowels' assonance, and the remaining vowels are minimized.  The sonnet is the poetic form selected, and its integrity is unaffected in a Lipassonet.  Use fewer definite and indefinite articles and pronouns, and prepositions, i.e., dependent on the chosen vowel.

 

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Eyes engaged her essence, freed ebullience;
The shelled release evokes observers' mien,
Altered beliefs reverberate cadence:
Poised effects externals, trade tales between.

Exemplified unveiled ether's ventures,
Exchanged entreat emergence, tweaked, performed;
Sweet ripened seed, exposes her dentures,
Appeared edgy yet sleepy decorum.

Perplexed, envisioned perspectives best bent,
Derived encased enterprise defined yield;
Enters the challenged endeavors event,
Coffee express delivery, appeal.

Excused episode, Excedrin tablets
Were real sleepers, next time, chocolates.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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