Exert Fear Genteel

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I don't fathom how love could ever hurt. ECHO - Exert What is simple in this lysergic exosphere? ECHO - Fear Can I be mentally ill or as vicious as an eel? ECHO - Genteel Why man is cursed by his fellow man ECHO - Clan Can I find solace in profound emptiness? ECHO - Unfriendliness what is this mysterious precipitation? ECHO - Nation Do you live where noise can be heard? ECHO - Misheard Can you silently pull from the cloud? ECHO - Loud What is the right of the powerful? ECHO - Fearful 1ST Place Contest Winner Written: January 07, 2023 Brian Strand Contest No 1167 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand ECHO VERSE: Echo verse has a pretty simple rule: Repeat the end syllable(s) of each line. No other rules.

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Meru Groen

Date: 1/10/2023 1:47:00 AM

Thank You for the introduction, and the succinct example, a valuable winner!

Valsa George

Date: 1/9/2023 10:16:00 PM

You are so adept at handling complicated poetic forms. Quite a ingenious writing that requires wisdom and expertise. Congratulations on your top place win.... dear friend.

Hilo Poet

Date: 1/9/2023 6:51:00 AM

Very nice penning here, Lasaad, an intricate format that I am simply overwhelmed by it my friend, and cheers to your top win that you truly aced here, Aloha William

Speaks Volumes

Date: 1/9/2023 3:27:00 AM

l have never seen echo verse before. lt has a stunning effect, and the poem is memorable. l am delighted by this poem. A well deserved first place.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/7/2023 3:59:00 PM

A unique, clever write, Lasaad. Never heard of this form--we learn something new every day. Keep exploring my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2023 2:15:00 PM

Creative work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/7/2023 1:55:00 PM

This echo verse is quite interesting Lasaad I don’t think I’ve come across it recently Can I sleep with my eyes open like the Gecko? ECHO-Echo, hey that could work but only as a wordplay, some very clever lines here, cheers David