Eric Boddie Poet Couplet

Excuses: a Feminine Experience

"Excuses:  A Feminine Experience"
by:  Eric L. Boddie

Oh how do I Love him....let me count the ways
But I'm tired of lying to my friends....he's just going through a phase
He works so many hours so if I just get home on time
Why do I have to choose the same time as fighting to occupy his mind
All I want is his Love....let's just get the record straight
If he hadn't been through so much, I wouldn't have to see his hate
If I didn't look so sexy while in the path of other guys
If only I could see that "I Love you" is just another of his lies
If only I could be everything he wanted in a girl
One day he will see just how much I compliment his world
If only I didn't chew so loud when I'm at the table
If I could just be more understanding, he could be more stable
They tell me I should leave, but my Love says I should stay
When he says "Baby I'm sorry," he'll get better is what I Pray
Every time he hits me....pushes or shoves
I have to forgive him....just to prove my Love

Ladies please break this chain....

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Connie Marcum Wong December 17, 2015 at 1:16 AM There are so many factors that figure in when there is abuse, especially when there are children involved. Often it is fear that will make a woman remain. A supportive friend or group can help the most. That is why I have an ex. Your last two lines describe some women I have met but in my case I was dealing with mental illness. A great message offered in this profound poem Eric.

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs December 15, 2015 at 9:19 PM Good poem, powerful and so true.

Poet Destroyer A December 15, 2015 at 7:57 PM I don't know about this poem, Eric, I'm not afraid to be me. Sad to say, I've seen many stand a punch just to feel loved. My EX once laid his hands on me. The next thing you know, he sat in jail for six months. A powerful poem and message. I think, we women will be alright at the end. Enjoyed. LINDA

Jaycee Cervenka December 15, 2015 at 6:35 AM I've had friends in abusive relationships, and this is how it starts. Then one day fear is the major factor. There is nothing I can say other than everyone is worth more than this. Nice reminder.

Michael Ellis December 14, 2015 at 12:30 PM Intense rhyming.. A story well told with a Plea at the end

Alainey Craig December 14, 2015 at 9:10 AM it harder than you think to break this chain theoretically we all want to be loved and cherished most of us forgive but we will never forget. the struggles real

Keith Bickerstaffe December 14, 2015 at 8:13 AM Superb couplet rhyming and sentiment. A very clever piece beautifully crafted. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith

Poesy Relish December 13, 2015 at 11:06 PM It is seen too often in and around us... hope all those who has to put up with such experience break the chain... good one Eric... nadiya

Eve Roper December 13, 2015 at 4:56 PM Very good write, Eric, my mother was one of these ladies.

Alexis Y. December 13, 2015 at 10:10 AM Eric, you have penned such a deep and revelant piece.Only when one learn to love themselves is when they realise love doesn't come in the form of a hit to the face. I know these chains that you speak of and they are hard to break but not impossible to break. Thanks for sharing such a powerful write ! 7 and a fav:-) Alexis

Rainbow Promise December 9, 2015 at 9:20 PM Very deep. Even in Health Centers there are posters offering help to Break such a Chain! Use these hotlines I say!