Excuse Me, Jimi

Excuse me while I kiss the sky
Seeking answers – why’d Jimi die?

Perhaps it was the Burning of the Midnight Lamp
Hey Joe!  Don’t know? Revisit his amp

Purple Haze shrouded by mystery
Woodstock legend resounds in history

Vietnam veteran’s soulful, haunting cry
Excuse me while I kiss this guy



* Written for Raul's Jimi Hendrix challenge
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Horne Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 6:52 AM
Sue enjoyed this one too - she loves Hendrix. Yes, LOL, ye olde English takes a bit of getting used to - my copy of CT has translations in the footnotes, though. I bought Juliet a DVD set for Xmas - a modern version of CT, such as the W of B as a man-eating actress - and she said it just didn't work. I know what she means, as modern settings often spoil operas or Shakespeare plays for us -we once saw Othello, where he was a gang leader on a council estate and killed D on a pub pool table LOL
Peranteau Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 8:10 AM
Great poem Carolyn and contest, one which I would like to enter. I named my son Jimi after Jimi...and the similarities are down right eerie ! Have a fantastic day love ! james
Knop Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 5:20 AM
What a well written tribute to Jimi Hendrix! Still got the Woodstock-records and even the movie on tape.I still remember his fabulous America Anthem! At the time of the Vietnam War I often talked to American soldiers stationed at my home town. They were afraid of being sent to Vietnam and I got an address were they could go to in case they wanted to desert the army. Thank God all this is now history!!! Thanks Carolyn for your comments...Love, Gert
Fraser Avatar
May 8, 2010 at 8:22 PM
Rock written tribute to Jimi, he never ever wanted to fight in any conflict, jailed for two years, released after one. Sadly he seccumbed to his own conflict > good luck in Raul's contest >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 2:40 PM
Great tribute write about this legendary musician ..good luck in Raul's exciting contest... my entry is The Rise and Demise of "Jimi" ... this one brought back memories.. I was quite the rebel in my youth and Jimi was the "MAN" ... luv.. Linda-Marie
Delacroix Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 6:34 PM
So original and creative dedication to Jimi Hendrix, Carolyn. Well done. Good luck in the contest and thank you for you all your nice comments on my poem series, "The Power of Love". Best wishes, love, Caroline.
Dietrich Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 12:40 PM
Oh, I really like this short sweet poem on Jimi!! HOpe you do well in this contest!! LUv, andrea (soupmail)
Trusty Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 11:35 AM
Carolyn, I found it difficult to encapsulate the essence of Jimi in 50 words but you did him proud. I LOV'd it! Thanks for the kind comments on my entries. JT (check Soup Mail)
Falotico Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 9:57 AM
This is really good Carolyn! And we can dance anytime you like love...Im stil working on my Jimmy poem..no easy so far..
Anderson Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 8:17 AM
Carolyn, Thnx for the comments on my writes...always appreciated....Jimmy
Flach Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 7:24 AM
Terrific use of his lyrics in this tribute! Well done, Carolyn!
Taylor Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 6:51 AM
Not familiar with Jimi Hendrix but Good Luck in the contest.
Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 6:44 AM
Great write that should do well in the contest..I'll have to look up this person and hear some of his work for I am not sure about who he is...Sara
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