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Exciting Unexpectedly

It is exciting
The snow falling in August
Unexpectedly.

It is exciting
To meet love at the market
Unexpectedly.

It is exciting
To have money in account
Unexpectedly.

It is exciting
Find syllables for HaiKu
Unexpectedly.


This new version to conform the syllable rules of HaiKu

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Skat A

Date: 6/2/2015 11:14:00 PM

Mario, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Debbie Knapp

Date: 6/16/2013 6:17:00 AM

Fantastic and very clever.

Mario De Paz
Date: 6/16/2013 10:26:00 AM

Hello. Debbie. You are enchanted to life and gentle with me

Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/9/2013 2:52:00 PM

Great poem. Love the ending

Mario De Paz
Date: 6/10/2013 8:52:00 AM

Thank you Monterey. Your comment is particularly welcome because you have lived much with children as me and we think in similar ways

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/8/2013 12:20:00 PM

I loved the clever twist in the end... I get excited myself when haiku pop up in my head out of nowhere. Though I like to break the syllable rules, personally... turning into more of a freestyle form of poetry. Nicely done and quite inventive!

Mario De Paz
Date: 6/10/2013 8:56:00 AM

I already replied about the syllable rule of HaiKu. I think I will turn to free verses instead of chosing the Haiku form, until I do not understand the correct meaning of HaiKu. Thank you for commenting. Be free to criticize when needed

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2013 2:42:00 PM

very COOL way to HaiKU

Mario De Paz
Date: 6/10/2013 8:58:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea, for commenting. About HaiKu, I have many doubts about the meaning and the rules to compose it correctly.

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/6/2013 8:02:00 AM

Money in the account, I concur!!! This was a very charming set of Haikus!

Mario De Paz
Date: 6/6/2013 11:08:00 AM

Very kind of you, I am honoured

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/5/2013 11:39:00 AM

Wonderfully done from beginning to end. Last one is more beautiful of haiku. Loved always, bl

Mario De Paz
Date: 6/6/2013 11:10:00 AM

Thank you for visiting and commenting. I only try to write what I think and I learned much from all of you soupers

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/5/2013 11:06:00 AM

superb Haiku Mario I love the flow simply exquisite Shadow

Mario De Paz
Date: 6/6/2013 11:12:00 AM

It is a pleasure to hear such compliments from you so kind. I try to be simple when writing, but I love reading on this site excellent poets like you