Mario De Paz Poet Haiku

Exciting Unexpectedly

It is exciting
The snow falling in August
Unexpectedly.

It is exciting
To meet love at the market
Unexpectedly.

It is exciting
To have money in account
Unexpectedly.

It is exciting
Find syllables for HaiKu
Unexpectedly.


This new version to conform the syllable rules of HaiKu

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Skat A June 2, 2015 at 11:14 PM Mario, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Debbie Knapp June 16, 2013 at 6:17 AM Fantastic and very clever. Mario De Paz June 16, 2013 at 10:26 AM Hello. Debbie. You are enchanted to life and gentle with me

Monterey Sirak June 9, 2013 at 2:52 PM Great poem. Love the ending Mario De Paz June 10, 2013 at 8:52 AM Thank you Monterey. Your comment is particularly welcome because you have lived much with children as me and we think in similar ways

Timothy Hicks June 8, 2013 at 12:20 PM I loved the clever twist in the end... I get excited myself when haiku pop up in my head out of nowhere. Though I like to break the syllable rules, personally... turning into more of a freestyle form of poetry. Nicely done and quite inventive! Mario De Paz June 10, 2013 at 8:56 AM I already replied about the syllable rule of HaiKu. I think I will turn to free verses instead of chosing the Haiku form, until I do not understand the correct meaning of HaiKu. Thank you for commenting. Be free to criticize when needed

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2013 at 2:42 PM very COOL way to HaiKU Mario De Paz June 10, 2013 at 8:58 AM Thank you, Andrea, for commenting. About HaiKu, I have many doubts about the meaning and the rules to compose it correctly.

Poet Tacito June 6, 2013 at 8:02 AM Money in the account, I concur!!! This was a very charming set of Haikus! Mario De Paz June 6, 2013 at 11:08 AM Very kind of you, I am honoured

Bl Devnath June 5, 2013 at 11:39 AM Wonderfully done from beginning to end. Last one is more beautiful of haiku. Loved always, bl Mario De Paz June 6, 2013 at 11:10 AM Thank you for visiting and commenting. I only try to write what I think and I learned much from all of you soupers

Shadow Hamilton June 5, 2013 at 11:06 AM superb Haiku Mario I love the flow simply exquisite Shadow Mario De Paz June 6, 2013 at 11:12 AM It is a pleasure to hear such compliments from you so kind. I try to be simple when writing, but I love reading on this site excellent poets like you

Poet Destroyer A June 5, 2013 at 8:43 AM ha ha, I wish to open the door to my restaurant and find everything done unexpectedly. LOL, that would get me excited. great haiku.... Linda Mario De Paz June 5, 2013 at 10:30 AM Thank you, Linda for visiting me. Also this is exciting unaxpectedly. I try to visit as many as possible, to learn and you are one of the best