Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Pantoum

Exciting Ride

With bated breath I’m on an exciting ride,
my head is out of the car’s open window.
As white sedan passes the greenery on roadside,
leave behind the rolling plateau in morning glow.

My head is out of the car’s open window,
I thrust out my neck adorning my favorite red tie, 
leave behind the rolling plateau in morning glow,
to meet my girlfriend after a while, I seemed to fly.

I thrust out my neck adorning my favorite red tie, 
look forward to seeing the journey ends real fast.
To meet my girlfriend after a while, I seemed to fly,
recalling, see you soon, I promised when met her last.

Look forward to seeing the journey ends real fast,
as white sedan passes the greenery on roadside.
Recalling, see you soon, I promised when met her last,
with bated breath I’m on an exciting ride.

May 25, 2020
Photo theme chosen : #2 
Contest : Pantoum Rhyme And Personification
Sponsor : Eve Roper

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Eve Roper June 14, 2020 at 4:30 PM Exciting Ride, Subimal, was an enjoyable poem. I like that you wrote, "to meet my girlfriend after a while", they do have feelings. A perfect rhyme and flow. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve