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Excited Sound

Ding Dong
Excitement lives
By the loud striking sound
Initiates a movement done
A powerful feeling comes from inside
It’s quite musical and pleasant
Some notes desired to hear
Programed in doors
Ding Dong

Russell Sivey

Entrant into nette onclaud's "SOUND OF EMOTION" contest

5/31/2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 5, 2012 at 11:09 AM

A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Russell. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

June 4, 2012 at 3:38 PM

Great one that has entered the winners' circle..Congrats on your win..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

June 3, 2012 at 6:35 PM

RUSSELL , Congratulations with your fun "SOUND OF EMOTION" entry in Nette's xool contest. take care ~always :-) PD

Kash Poet

June 3, 2012 at 1:51 PM

Oh..my..you have also written about that sound Russell.I missed it.Congrats on your win with this beautiful write.

Nette Onclaud

June 3, 2012 at 10:00 AM

russell, your kind of thrilling sound excites me... happy congrats on your placement with huggs!..:)

Olusegun Arowolo

June 3, 2012 at 8:08 AM

Congratulations,Russel..Wonderful piece,great win...Kudos to you,pal....

David Williams

June 3, 2012 at 5:31 AM

Russell congrats on your great win..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 31, 2012 at 8:31 PM

wonderfully creative Russell luv and wishing u much success in Nette's contest.. brilliance becomes u and I am enjoying catching up on PS.. thankxx for enjoying "Sinless Moon".. will ber posting a few more in the future.. so appreciate your kind words of splenderous comments.. luv..

Joann Grisetti

May 31, 2012 at 5:59 PM

Doorbells can bring friends, or surprises, or Jehovah's Witnesses. Maybe all three are the same. One never knows. Great poem.

Nette Onclaud

May 31, 2012 at 3:07 PM

russell, my friend... thanks for joining.. i didn;t read this thoroughly; just want to savor this near judging time.. hugggs!:)

Jack Horne

May 31, 2012 at 1:33 PM

love this description of the door bell, Russell. Congrats on all your wins, my friend : )

Andrea Dietrich

May 31, 2012 at 8:18 AM

I feel dread when people are at my door. hahaha. But that's cool that you are excited to see them. I just usually get salesmen or charity people!! COOL way to describe that sound, Russell thanks for the heads up on my poem. I had noticed at the last minute that we were not supposed to be "erotic" so I had tried to fix the poem and didn't realize I forgot to add another line into it in the process. now it is fixed!