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Excited Sound

Ding Dong Excitement lives By the loud striking sound Initiates a movement done A powerful feeling comes from inside It’s quite musical and pleasant Some notes desired to hear Programed in doors Ding Dong Russell Sivey Entrant into nette onclaud's "SOUND OF EMOTION" contest 5/31/2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/5/2012 11:09:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Russell. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/4/2012 3:38:00 PM

Great one that has entered the winners' circle..Congrats on your win..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/3/2012 6:35:00 PM

RUSSELL , Congratulations with your fun "SOUND OF EMOTION" entry in Nette's xool contest. take care ~always :-) PD

Kash Poet

Date: 6/3/2012 1:51:00 PM

Oh..my..you have also written about that sound Russell.I missed it.Congrats on your win with this beautiful write.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/3/2012 10:00:00 AM

russell, your kind of thrilling sound excites me... happy congrats on your placement with huggs!..:)

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 6/3/2012 8:08:00 AM

Congratulations,Russel..Wonderful piece,great win...Kudos to you,pal....

David Williams

Date: 6/3/2012 5:31:00 AM

Russell congrats on your great win..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/31/2012 8:31:00 PM

wonderfully creative Russell luv and wishing u much success in Nette's contest.. brilliance becomes u and I am enjoying catching up on PS.. thankxx for enjoying "Sinless Moon".. will ber posting a few more in the future.. so appreciate your kind words of splenderous comments.. luv..

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/31/2012 5:59:00 PM

Doorbells can bring friends, or surprises, or Jehovah's Witnesses. Maybe all three are the same. One never knows. Great poem.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/31/2012 3:07:00 PM

russell, my friend... thanks for joining.. i didn;t read this thoroughly; just want to savor this near judging time.. hugggs!:)

Jack Horne

Date: 5/31/2012 1:33:00 PM

love this description of the door bell, Russell. Congrats on all your wins, my friend : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2012 8:18:00 AM

I feel dread when people are at my door. hahaha. But that's cool that you are excited to see them. I just usually get salesmen or charity people!! COOL way to describe that sound, Russell thanks for the heads up on my poem. I had noticed at the last minute that we were not supposed to be "erotic" so I had tried to fix the poem and didn't realize I forgot to add another line into it in the process. now it is fixed!

Karen Deeks

Date: 5/30/2012 11:34:00 PM

Hello perfect projection of the excitement felt upon the arrival of visitors... good luck ...karen