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Excited Flesh

. So off came mine cloth as did hers in the full spectrum of the early sun's bright And now mine flesh excited oh yes the flesh which soon would excite in the depth of hers i did with ebullience pant In thankfulness I promised the trees vision for their comfortable block uv light And for the plush of grass Which mine nether felt ease as her petite spent I gave pledge to replicate on its blue green plant

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/30/2011 4:52:00 PM

Just checkin to see if you got that cloth back on my sweet. Gettin cold out there!...:)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/23/2011 9:34:00 PM

My eyes poppin outta ma haid. Cain't getcha outta ma mahnd. Ooooh so sweet dear friend.

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/6/2011 7:26:00 PM

You have the passionate soul of a painter! Wow...a painter of words...red/orange and all the colors of a hot spectrum...beautiful writing!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/16/2011 10:06:00 AM

Excited flesh indeed. what a passionate write this is, James :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/14/2011 7:12:00 AM

Huh uh James how could you expose the grass to such passion??? you had me smiling with this one :) good thing I am at work, love Wilma

James Peranteau
Date: 6/2/2021 12:03:00 AM

Ty dear poet...much love, james

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/14/2011 12:46:00 AM

did you get yourself under her skin, james?? a sassy piece, wow..:) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2011 10:27:00 PM

My, you do love to write about excited flesh, james! A passionate poet you are indeed! So tell me about getting your trolls in soap. I don't recall that at all. What kind of soap did you buy to get your troll dolls?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/13/2011 5:31:00 PM

oh James with my fervor and your excited flesh.. oh the possibilities luv.. so glad u enjoyed and hope all is going well with u partner..

Daver Austin

Date: 6/13/2011 2:41:00 PM

"The poundage of nothingness." I love it Splendor in the grass, indeed! Were I a tree, thee hath promised me vision. Indeed my bright red doth clash with the blue green patch. Another masterpiece, Sir James. Love, daver

James Foulk

Date: 6/13/2011 11:43:00 AM

very romantic piece of poetry. thank you for commenting on Heaven's Delight.

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/12/2011 11:50:00 PM

:) :) Ow that green green grass,thank God ,it doesn't speak,lol :)Glad to read you,missed you my friend..how is Noah?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/12/2011 4:10:00 PM

oooo! i like this passionate poem.. full of excitement... thanks for the vission,,, always,..p.d.

James Peranteau
Date: 6/2/2021 12:00:00 AM

Yw vooman....much love, james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/12/2011 3:58:00 PM

Mine passionate friend, I be left speechelss. Quite erotic, James. Hope you and Noah have had a nice weekend. On Thursday I have the MRI and hopefully that will determine the cause of the nerve damage. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/12/2011 3:26:00 PM

well James now I am excited from reading these exquisite romantic lines luv.. sultry flow invigorates ... wonderful words of passion.oh..