James Peranteau Poet Rhyme

Excited Flesh

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     So off came mine cloth
              as did hers
in the full spectrum of the early
             sun's bright

                And now
        mine flesh excited
                 oh yes
  the flesh which soon would
                 excite
                    in
        the depth of hers
                     i
       did with ebullience
                  pant

        In thankfulness
     I promised the trees
                vision
    for their comfortable
          block uv light

  And for the plush of grass
Which mine nether felt ease
      as her petite spent
 I gave pledge to replicate
       on its blue green 
                plant

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Elizabeth Wesley October 30, 2011 at 4:52 PM Just checkin to see if you got that cloth back on my sweet. Gettin cold out there!...:)

Elizabeth Wesley September 23, 2011 at 9:34 PM My eyes poppin outta ma haid. Cain't getcha outta ma mahnd. Ooooh so sweet dear friend.

Carrie Richards July 6, 2011 at 7:26 PM You have the passionate soul of a painter! Wow...a painter of words...red/orange and all the colors of a hot spectrum...beautiful writing!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 16, 2011 at 10:06 AM Excited flesh indeed. what a passionate write this is, James :)

Wilma Neels June 14, 2011 at 7:12 AM Huh uh James how could you expose the grass to such passion??? you had me smiling with this one :) good thing I am at work, love Wilma James Peranteau June 2, 2021 at 12:03 AM Ty dear poet...much love, james

Nette Onclaud June 14, 2011 at 12:46 AM did you get yourself under her skin, james?? a sassy piece, wow..:) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2011 at 10:27 PM My, you do love to write about excited flesh, james! A passionate poet you are indeed! So tell me about getting your trolls in soap. I don't recall that at all. What kind of soap did you buy to get your troll dolls?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 13, 2011 at 5:31 PM oh James with my fervor and your excited flesh.. oh the possibilities luv.. so glad u enjoyed and hope all is going well with u partner..

Daver Austin June 13, 2011 at 2:41 PM "The poundage of nothingness." I love it Splendor in the grass, indeed! Were I a tree, thee hath promised me vision. Indeed my bright red doth clash with the blue green patch. Another masterpiece, Sir James. Love, daver

James Foulk June 13, 2011 at 11:43 AM very romantic piece of poetry. thank you for commenting on Heaven's Delight.

C.C Bloomsfield June 12, 2011 at 11:50 PM :) :) Ow that green green grass,thank God ,it doesn't speak,lol :)Glad to read you,missed you my friend..how is Noah?

Poet Destroyer A June 12, 2011 at 4:10 PM oooo! i like this passionate poem.. full of excitement... thanks for the vission,,, always,..p.d. James Peranteau June 2, 2021 at 12:00 AM Yw vooman....much love, james

Carolyn Devonshire June 12, 2011 at 3:58 PM Mine passionate friend, I be left speechelss. Quite erotic, James. Hope you and Noah have had a nice weekend. On Thursday I have the MRI and hopefully that will determine the cause of the nerve damage. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 12, 2011 at 3:26 PM well James now I am excited from reading these exquisite romantic lines luv.. sultry flow invigorates ... wonderful words of passion.oh..