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grey rainy sky smiles after drought. excited I am, kissed by the rain

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Date: 10/20/2023 7:06:00 PM
Dear Maria, your beautiful monoku captures the feeling of your chosen word "excited" with poetic finesse. Splendid imagery! I love the rain. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/21/2023 12:07:00 AM
Hello Susan. Thank you so much for your lovely comment and wishes. Have a great day!
Date: 10/19/2023 11:46:00 AM
Lovely arrangement of words.. Congratulations on your placement.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/19/2023 12:14:00 PM
Thank you very much Silent One. Have a nice evening...!
Date: 10/18/2023 7:03:00 PM
The excitement of a rain storm…the blustery branches and raindrops falling on window panes, on heads. :)
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/19/2023 12:19:00 AM
True. I also love these rainy days, as soon as I don't get wet. Thank you for your beautiful comment Kimxxxx
Date: 10/18/2023 12:16:00 PM
so cute. awesome!
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/18/2023 12:31:00 PM
Thanks a lot Andrea. Hugsxxx
Date: 10/18/2023 11:45:00 AM
This is beautiful and full of imagery. Blessings.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/18/2023 11:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor. Have a nice evening...!
Date: 10/16/2023 6:54:00 PM
rain can be a love story, delicious poem Maria, take care
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/17/2023 12:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Yann. Have a nice dayxxx

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