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Excited

grey rainy sky smiles after drought. excited I am, kissed by the rain
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Ashley Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 7:06 PM
Dear Maria, your beautiful monoku captures the feeling of your chosen word "excited" with poetic finesse. Splendid imagery! I love the rain. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 12:07 AM
Hello Susan. Thank you so much for your lovely comment and wishes. Have a great day!
One Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 11:46 AM
Lovely arrangement of words.. Congratulations on your placement.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 12:14 PM
Thank you very much Silent One. Have a nice evening...!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 7:03 PM
The excitement of a rain storm…the blustery branches and raindrops falling on window panes, on heads. :)
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 12:19 AM
True. I also love these rainy days, as soon as I don't get wet. Thank you for your beautiful comment Kimxxxx
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 12:16 PM
so cute. awesome!
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 12:31 PM
Thanks a lot Andrea. Hugsxxx
Buhagiar Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 11:45 AM
This is beautiful and full of imagery. Blessings.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 11:55 AM
Thank you so much Victor. Have a nice evening...!
Rolland Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 6:54 PM
rain can be a love story, delicious poem Maria, take care
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 12:47 AM
Thank you so much Yann. Have a nice dayxxx
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