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Excited

Every day I see children excited Makes me feel really delighted Children on a playground swing Parents just sitting doing their thing I go to the races, and when they win People just cant keep their excitement in The thrill of winning is bound to excite Especially for a contest on a poetry site Been a long time since I have had luck At the club one night I won a duck I was lucky that I had struck it Until I got home and had to pluck it Had my share of excitement and fun Last year I went in City to Surf fun run Hundreds of entrants at the starting Many on the way were seen departing This the end of my entry to the contest I'll be excited if picked as the best I'll put the trophy high up on a shelf Cause the only one to look at it is myself. Sponsor Constance La France Contest Name Writing Challenge - Words with 'X' Word Chosen : excited 1st May 2023

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Date: 5/4/2023 6:46:00 AM
Mervyn, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations. !
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Merv Hold
Date: 5/4/2023 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Constance. It actually gave me excitement to see my name up there on your list.
Date: 5/1/2023 12:16:00 AM
Yes it is nice to see people excited and happy. A good poem. Well done.
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Merv Hold
Date: 5/1/2023 8:10:00 PM
Thank you Jeanette

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