Exchanged For Youth

I will count no more those wasted tears
as gambled wages spent
for all my days in toiled years
were worthy of every cent

It's sure, not all my dreams came true
and love it came and went
but for all the trials and all the moods
like a staircase it mapped my assent

For in wisdom gained abides these three
reflection, limitation and experience 
through alterations I couldn't foresee 
they crushed or bred resilience 

Reflection remains the wisest call
where limitation magnifies humility
experience is the worst of all
bitterness can be self-defeating hostility

As a child born to a wandering sea
I board the ship of pearl
and bind myself to reflections plea
as ties of error unfurl

Before me now is the cost revealed
wisdom has taught me many a truth
It's sunless crypt has come unsealed
and taken in exchange my youth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 8:54 AM
I absolutely love this piece! The rhythm, the flow, the message are perfect! I'm glad I stopped by this morning.
Halliday Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 12:40 AM
Very insightful piece. The past tense of to breed is bred, not bread, though.
Virden Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 12:51 AM
Oh, thank you so much! I'll fix that right away.
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