Excavation

Intrigued by what is hidden 
inspired by the forbidden,
I dare to excavate the caverns of your mind.
     Heartache has created walls,
walls that serve as protectors against pain and disappointment.
Past pain & old haunting hurts have banded together to stop the reoccurrence of heartache.
         As a result of this alliance,
the core of you has been locked away.
        I want to know you.
I want that which is concealed.
I love that of you free to be loved,
I desire to love that of you locked away.

More than having the joy of you loving me, I just want the pleasure of you- letting me, love you.

   What pain has created this enigma? 
What disappointment led to the construction of this wall? 
Why is it so hard to just let yourself fall?

Hearts racing resulting from extreme emotion;
          your pounding heart likened 
          to a smarting thumb.
Why does feeling cause you to become numb? 

Dreams of crumbling walls and mysteries solved are all my mind can fathom. 
     More than revealing secrets from within, I just long to be let in.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/28/2016 10:51:00 PM
Stephanie Bethel, nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 2/19/2015 6:53:00 PM
Stephanie:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 1/31/2015 1:26:00 AM
Stephanie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/31/2015 1:02:00 AM
Stephanie, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/30/2015 6:12:00 AM
"I dare to excavate the caverns of your mind" like a psychologist hunting the meaning of each thought,feeling and desire ,at the other side love grows in your verses.Congrat.
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